by Samuelx
People have tried to give you constructive criticism for years, but you never change. You have applied the same SpamX formula to this story as you have thousands of times before. It was bad writing then, its worse now.
Holy crap, you must have a dozen stories set in Wal-Mart
I hope they sue your ass for damaging their reputation by writing these. Then again, nobody actually likes your garbage, so no loss I guess.