Its good. But you might want to concentrate more details on the two characters than the parents of Christina. More of what she feels or how things she want. Its good. Can do much better.
I am Samuelx. I am Black. I am Male. I was born in Cap-Haitien, Northern Haiti, and raised in Brockton, Massachusetts. I now live in Canada. I am the one and only Haitian Trickster, and quite simply live only by my own rules. I...