All Comments on 'Black to White'

Truly loving story. Captured the complex relationships very well. Believable and well-written.

Good story!

5

The whole time I was reading, I kept thinking how you got every detail perfect, right down to the dogs waiting for toast. Well done, TP, well done.

I tried getting into it, but things were so blatantly telegraphed that it quickly lost its luster. Nice story though, 3/5

Wow. Beautifully written. Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent.

Excellent in every way!

Such an amazing sweet and tender story. Thank you for all of the hard work you put into writing it so beautifully.

God, woman! You sure can write a love story.

I gave you only five stars 'cos I can't give any more than that. Beautifully written, nice pacing, and - oh, heck - just a great story. Thank-you!

And, as always, ignore the trolls, especially those who won't leave their names and have not, themselves, written anything, ever ... :)

Absolutely BEAUTIFUL story! Loved their growing love, Paul's concern, then the opening of the floodgates in every way -- his cock explodes inside her! I like the sexy hairy chest on Paul, his anatomy (that is thankfully not gigantic in length -- more realistic!). Their love is wonderful, and I'm glad it ends with the white wedding dress that Devon helps Sam buy. You could even write more for this story that explores more of their lovemaking.

THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH!!

Paul

That was totally, completely, fucking AWESOME!

Sweet and tight.

Great story. Hope there are other chapters.

Beautiful, gentle, loving in every way, story, Maybe wishful thinking for the older man but also reflective that we are not all pervy, dirty old men but men who admire and love the beauty and sexuality of the younger woman who we wiah to cherish and ackowledge for being themselves. Thank you for your talent.

This is a perfect example of how to blend raw sex with loving tenderness. It hit a special place for me because ironically my daughter actually had a friend named Samantha who I began to feel guilty about finding attractive once she became an adult. Nothing ever happened but if it had I would want it to have been as sweet and kind as this story!

One of the best sweet, sexy, heart-felt stories I’ve read in such a long time. Bravo!

Wow!

Lovely tale. I don’t think there was much doubt once things started heading that way but it was a great ride getting to a sweet ending. Well done.

Not quite what I was expecting but well thought out and delivered. I thought there'd be more of an issue between Sam and Devon and between Sam and her Mom even though she'd moved away.

Wonderful! So tender

Beautiful

Loved the gentleness... No one but Samantha could have done this. To think now the best friends are related.

Oh. My. God.

Why isn't there more than 5 stars to click?

When the story first started I felt an immense sadness. As it progressed I could see where it was going, but the way your story took me there .... it was an incredible piece of writing. And yes the lovemaking was all kinds of hot....but it was the way you wrote and descried her feelings that made it so.

I appreciate the title very much as well.

I ... god, when I grow up I want to write like you.

stunning. thank you.

Beautiful.x

Outstanding! The ending is beautiful… so much said in so few words.

Very beautiful

What a lovely, warm story. Three lovable characters and no villains.

And Paul. In love with his wife for years after her passing. Where does a girl find a guy like that?

Keep writing!

Five stars, nice, very nicely written.

Just so good, 5⭐️

Among a sea of LW, or just plain out porn, this was a very well written, warm, pleasant surprise. Thanks!

Nice.

Some authors write stroke stories, some write erotic stories, some write bad ending stories, some write stories that appeal to my kinks.

But only @TarnishedPenney can write a love story that takes a two people who don't have a clue where they are at to take them beautifully, erotically, and gently to where they belong at the end of the day

I love your delicate touch in knowing when less can be more in your descriptions.

Jesus, you’re ability to bring emotions to life with your writing is amazing. Too bad there aren’t more than 5🌟’s . Thanks again!

Dear Tarnished Penny, your ability to inexorably and most wonderfully pull us along into your story! Thank you! I don't know how long you posted this story but some sequels would be wanted reading I'm sure. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟