by Samuelx
So the start was good you built up the problem and your main characters personality but then you skipped right to the conclusion of the story with the heroine already broken. You forgot the middle of your story.
There is nothing erotic at all here. Just endless blame tossing and bemoaning of life as a minority.
This story is RACIST If you want to talk about white privilege explain Jussie Smollett to me
GREAT STORY!!!! I JUST HAD ONE PROBLEM WITH IT. NO STRAP ON OR ANUL SEX . IT MAKES IT SOUND GAY. I'M NOT GAY!! LIKE I SAID NICE TRY!! A BLACK GOD!!!!!!
What kind of story writer?? No reality.... 1 page writer... nothing else... most of story 1 pages... bullshit