All Comments on 'Black Werewolf Saga'

You still haven't developed any writing skills. It's hard to believe you keep pouring out this racist dribble and haven't improved as a writer.

Good intro chapter. Ignore the other anonymous pig who is bashing you. So far you have a solid base for a good read that has lots of conflict and chemistry. Racism is still very prevalent and bigotry in multiple forms continues to afflict everyone including myself. The previous commenter is obviously a close minded bigot fool to not recognize good creative writing. One can only to be open minded enough to recognize their own brand of bigotry and set it aside once in a while. It will be interesting how the rest of the story plays out. The only I could wish for from this chapter is more.

The writing sucks major earthworm dick. The flow is horrible. It is missing the basic speech punctuation. He always does this. Don't lie to this turd.