by libidinal
I found the story fairly interesting, but the over-empathized "black talk" was really straight out of a darky minstrel show. Tone it down for realism, please.
That was awesome but yeah the ebonix kind of stole some thunder. Did keep the girls sorted out for me tho.
Great story but you kind of messed it up with your impressions on how black people talk!
I agree with all of the comments. For you to make Cheryl use did and dat is racism at its most basic. I know you might think you are not racist, but at the very least, you are perpetuating a racial stereotype.