All Comments on 'Blackhawk Hall Ch. 02'

You have me wondering what the hell our invisible antagonist is up to too. Love this storyline and love the characters. You've got a talent for bringing them to life.

Jason

You have the start of a great story here. Nice plot, good characters, well written, and a lot of potential. I'm looking forward to reading many more chapters. In the mean time I'm going to start reading your Danica series. Keep up the good work!

i really like this story so far, but ashtar's yoda-talk is kind of strange. i could understand him speaking differently because he is from a different region, but the way he speaks is just weird. i actually found myself skipping the paragraphs where he was talking because it was too much effort to try to decipher what he was trying to say.

Your work is amazing! The sexual encounters wouldnt be fulfilled but became more and more frequent until the encounter between Ari and the Duchess, wonderful writing style. Love the slow buildup, frustrating but well worth it. Dont stop writing these incredible stories! :)

Loved hearing more about Christie and Cerebus! Keep it up!!!

Am I the only one here who would like to see this as a possible hentai miniseries........ I trey can't be.

On a side note.

I read all or lowborn in one day it was extremely amazing. I'm not sure if this was written before or after that but I have you booked marked on my iPod and I will be back to read always

Ps. I ALWAYS VOTE 5 stars for your work.