by qualitywheat
However there were a few times where it got kind of corny and weird, for example "Then he jumped up and started running around like a mad man, shouting "yippee, yippee, yipeeeeeeee!"
It was not that big a deal but it did distract.
the Age difference is a bit too much imho but your Story is a nice love Story. i give that 5 stars.
There is no blackmail, here. It is EXTORTION - an entirely different concept and act, with significantly differing repercussions.