by TheDarkCloud
Poorly written,non erotic,total bullshit black fantasy, but mostley stupid!
Different kind of story. You could keep writing from here, anywhere you want to go?
Not enough details during the sex parts.
Black fantasy it is but it's what I've always suspected and knew: There is a very real deep-seated hatred and lust for the white woman in a lot of black men. If I were to wave a wand and reverse the power in this country in favor of blacks, what you've read here would be gospel and even worse still.
Tension is in the air. A psychologist could write a seminal paper on such a theme.
The ending is completly over done and makes the black guy look like a real bastard. I'll never read anything by him again.
You expected for this black teen to continue and lie to her. But you are slammed with a great ending
Seems to me like the real racist here is the black teenager. This is pure race hate fiction with a truly messed up message!
Fantasies are Perfect !!!! But reality sucks. The story proves that the Black jumps on White Woman like the way a starving street urchins gazes pounds at the sweet on display...feelings like a long starving child-who is asked to consume the entire delicious food in a minute.
Curtis could not have got away just before the police arrived. Their cars would be on the street when the police arrived. The police would have arrested any black punks running out of the house in a rich neighbourhood. So much for your ending. The mother and son would have stopped fucking as soon as they saw each other. They would have told the entering police that the mother was raped and the black punks cum would be found. These blank punks would be sent to jail for 50 years for kidnapping, rape, etc.
Loved it. Now the husband will be fired, the kid taking black cock in prison and the wife will be in jail for rape of a minor and will be every black womans bitch😫
The white priss wife who doesn’t suck hubbys cock has to suck on the teens bbc and eat his load, I had to wait to read the rest later lol that was all I could take
Curtis is pissed off at the racist PE teacher.
Zach was a sort of friend but was unwittingly the ‘tool’ for getting to Mrs Cole.
He achieved his goal and not only got an innocent housewife (presumably) to give him a good time but also to get Curtis a sick kicks.
Brilliant story but why did Curtis have to double-cross Mrs Cole?? The PE teacher turned out to be an innocent victim of an ice stupid wife and son? Zack will be proven innocent despite the dodgy evidence, Mrs Cole will go to jail and Curtis has lost a good blackmail victim.
Even though it is fiction, the racist teacher should have gone to jail to be abused.
I did not like it at all and I am Black! and ... South African! One who knows about Apartheid en oppression!
No half intelligent woman would go along with a farce like this for numerous reasons.
In your beginning scene he dropped the knife on the coffee table. She crawled over to him and was between him and the coffee table. Why didn't she pick up the knife and stab the prick somewhere. Didn't like the story one bit, sorry!
I muddled through it, it wasn't the normal type of story I'd read, but after the first few paragraphs I decided to read it all. The story seemed well written, and the action was what I expected. Good job.