All Comments on 'Blackmailing My Moms Pt. 05'

Good story but damn you need to proofread before you post, or get an editor.

Loving these stories - keep going with this series. Thanks dude!

author, your stories are always frustrating, you wrote more than 5 chapters and got nothing but a blowjob, your characters always seem like an elementary school kid mentality, why not make the story with big chapters with 3 to 4 pages instead of only 1.2 very short where we are just frustrated waiting months to see something good in your story

I like these stories but Id like to see some progression. A virgin with all these women would have lost it by now. Okay you want to introduce all the family but they should be at different stages.

Also Dan came 5 times in the day, I get that he is young and virile but the degree of sperm shouldnt be large at the end.

loving it, too bad you stopped

Outstanding. Never get a proofreader or editor if it slows down your production. Damn!

Thanks for sharing your work!

Proofreading editors are free. Use them

Good thing you get to make shit up as a writer. You're not this clever.