by TxRad
...a little with the title. Black's Beach in La Jolla used to be clothing optional... a twist on the traditional "coming of age" theme, with two girls exploring their limits...fun read.
We used to have a beach like that here but it has been closed, anything you know near Cocoa? Great story too by the way- fun! fun! fun! in the sun! sun! sun!
These characters were boring. Usually you write characters with a sensitive hand or Hell on wheels but never dull formula people as in this submission.I think you have some wonderful humans in your heart and I would like to know about them. Leighlilly
Sexy stuff, all right -- but kinky in an awkward way! There's heat here, but pitifully little true sexuality -- and no sense. Still, I gave it a 4.