All Comments on 'Blood for the Vampiress Ch. 05'

Your story has been mentioned in the New Story Reviews in the Author's Hangout!

you have to tell us why morgan chose melvin. i hope you go in to that plot more in to the future.

I thought there would be more Oomph to it. The fight scene was good and the battle between Morgan and Mina and Marvin coming to her rescue. It just seemed like you rushed the ending. I agree with annonymous tho. I would also like to see how Morgan picked Marvin to be her intended.

Melvin not Marvin.. Sorry for mistaking his name

An absolutely brilliant short story! ..I wonder if you have considered cleaning it and expanding on little bits here and there and then shooting for full publishing??

I do hope you are penning more..

enjoyed your story. Clever adding Mina Harker and Morgan Le Fay.