by TE999
This is definitely a fast and fun adventure with lots with a smoking hot romance. Great story, TE!
That was hot and very romantic at the same time. cant wait to read more.!!!!!!
i loved the story and everything about it, especially how you added in a nice little mystery in there with the councilman. my only regret is i wish it was longer with more character development, but still a damn good story!
It was wam bam and done there was no build the story was all over the place it was forced and you are in a need for a editor or a better editor