All Comments on 'Blue Hair Pt. 01'

Beautifully done!

Great job. So many more chapters abound for these two characters please.

this deserves continuation

Love it! So many wonderful, colorful images here, painting naughty pictures in my mind. Masterfully done again, sir.

Absolutely loved it, TX!

Well written, cute, and just hot as hell. Think I will just add it to my favorites.

Wow looking forward to the sequel!

Cheers

SAGE

AWESOME

This could be an excellent series. I hope there is more to come.

Fun story, with lots of build-up. That can be boring, but you do it very well and kept me aroused. You're also one of the few who knows grammar and spelling, so errors didn't distract me. I'm going to read some of your other stories, but please write the sequel to this.

Great beginning!

5

good start, very interesting.

DG Hear

So many avenues to explore now….

They're GREAT, and naughty...!

LOVE that there's more...age play, public exhibitionism, she wants to be spanked...never been a turn-on for me before but in this story, with her, it is-both love the way she tastes, and only her third-?!? wasn't clear to me if that was smoking cock, or swallowing, but sheesh...boys these days...!

No surprise she's bald, these days, but would be even better if she was counter to the trend of what's current in one more way and had a full muffin.... easy five, and fave... and we don't eve know her name yet...