All Comments on 'Blue Taboo'

Please continue this story

Damn it's been a wile since someone put up a good ass story. Lately they have been shitty and suck. This one from begging till end was a good story. You have to keep up with this shit you could even have them all 3 have a 3some that shit would be hot.

Really enjoyed this and hope you can continue where this leaves off. What happens next? There are many possibilities.

I loved your story.

Please continue with more.

He needed more backbone...

I thought is was a well-done story. sexy, erotic, and lots of fun. But we need chapter 2. Do Cindy and hugh continue? hopefully. what about Rachael/ is there a reconciliation? You're a good writer and story-teller - so i hope there's more!!!

Enjoyed that ...

Unsure about manoblue and backbone, it all worked for me !!

You wouldn't believe how fucking horny I get reading your stories. Man oh man, you are one of my favorite writers. I love the intimate descriptions, the details, the passion. Like Rachel, bouncing up and down, please keep 'em cumming.

very hot sex, but... squicked out by bodies covered w/ink and piercings myself...should definitely stick with his sis

... I really don't like girls with tatts.

With you going into so much detail about them it ruined the episodes with Rachel, well it did for me.

And this seems to end in mid air. It needs another page at least to finish it properly.

All together I was disappointed with it. But it may just be me.........

Rapier

Good story with vivid characters. The over the top sex with the niece didn't really seem to fit with the story, but I respect your decision to go there. Overall, very good read. Will be checking out more of your work for sure.

I just read this again and it was still Damn Good. I have to say Rachel was one messed up girl, makes you wonder what happened to her

it would have been a better story if Rachel was a good girl instead of a freak. just my opinion otherwise good writing.

Good story but definitely needs another chapter to conclude it. So much left unfinished.

One of the best I've read here. Loved the twist with the nice

Well written and thought out story. Many surprises but in the end, Pretty good.

Good story, although a little rambling at times. I personally thought that it needed another page of two to be complete...