All Comments on 'Bob and Jan'

JPB and Humphrey Bogart just ' dont gibe a damm' . I'm cool with that even if I'm not cool like that.

I'd love to be this guy!

Thanks - Again!!!

JPB is at it again.

you were in and out and gone.....TK U MLJ LV NV

i'm sorry, but those jokes are aweful!

That joke about aids? An up date of an old Irish joke:

Pat was on his death bed, and told Judith, his wife to have Mike stop by.

“Mike, I’m lying here a dieing, and I’ve got a last request for ya.”

“Sure Pat, I’ll be glad to do whatever ya want.”

“Go down to the pub, and tell the lads there that the reason the casket was closed that the Syphilis was so bad me face wasn’t decent.”

“For god’s sake, Pat, you’ve got the cancer, not syphilis. Why would you want me to tell a lie like that”

“I don’t want those low bastards calling on my wife while I’m still warm in the grave!”

An alternate ending with a much different meaning

“For god’s sake, Pat, why would you want me to tell ‘em such a thing?”

“I don’t want me mates calling on me wife when I’m gone!”

LOL

Chilley

Large percent of the story consists of unrelated jokes. Hope this is a series, because the ending is abrupt and indecisive. (Yeah, Life is that way, but Fiction shouldn't be!) Also don't understand why our Bull Hero didn't ask about Hubby's reasoning during the withdrawal times...or why Hero and Sweetie switched over to being 'in your face.' ?

And it is about cheating since the husband clearly doen't approve.

I'd also suggest you get in touch with mitchfren for some decent jokes!

Not much of a story and the jokes aren't going to make it on late night, but a couple were pretty funny.

But it is a strange ending unless there is another chapter yet to come.

It seems as if Jan knows what she wants and that's young cock and plenty of it.

After all, Bob is a lot younger than Jan,and can give her plenty of fucking that she needs.

I hope to see more where Jan gets her young cock and her family

Thanks for the read.

At least you did not turn her into a screaming size queen whore for the company - you sometimes do that you know. So maybe you did and we just don't know it yet.

good jokes and i cant wait for the second chapter. gave you a 5.

Jan is a cheating skank whore cunt twat wife cuckolding her husband with a jerk-off who fucks married women if they ask. All cheaters should die.

The jokes were good.

HA

Just sit back and follow the story, don't think too much about it!

The jokes were good. I think in the free West World is difficult to understand what did it mean the political jokes in the communist East countries. When was at the great transient from East to West, I was with collegues from other departments on a outer course in a Hotel. That time was when the East Germany people got free way to West in Hungary in autumn 1989. A collegue from an other department and me told ONLY political jokes in shift. I told a political joke the other think for a new one and he told I think for a newer. We made our collegues laugh for 2 and half or 3 hours NON STOP nafter dinner. I live in freedom and I forgot 80% of those political Jokes.

However I tell one:

Breznev the first Soviet leader (between about 1964-1981) gets up to go working to the Kreml. The personal driver looks at Breznev with very strange sight. Breznev feells himself akward. They arrive to the gate of the Kreml. The wards look at Breznev with very strange sight, breznev feels himself with very very akward. Breznev sits down on his desk and his secretary enters and she looks at weirdly to him. Breznev becomes stressfull with the akward situations, so he asks his secretary.

"Maria Alexandrovna What is the strange on me?"

The secretary answers:

"Kind Tovaris Breznev where are your HONORS????"

Breznev touches his Chest and he discovers the lack of the medals of honors with despair.

"I FORGOT ON MY PYJAMAS!!!!!"

Get it Bob?

a wife has cancer and can't fuck, if the husband files for divorce. Then he isn't a man, but he has acute ED then she either gets to have a lover or a divorce. I guess its okay to be a whore than a good wife.

Good lord what an idiot. This is fiction; that means it is all make believe. There is no double standard because these aren't real people you imbecile.

no shit you fucking moron, next you make a comment look in the mirror, then go back and play with your dolls queer. Next time look before you leap you cumguzzling whack job. Wasn't talking to you dick cheese.

She says, "I don't want to rub his nose in it," and then proceeds to rub his nose in it. Very interesting premise and I understand the impetus for their arrangement, but there is clearly no love in this kind of relationship. The hubby should have ended it. Is there more to this story?

First, this was not a proper ending even by your standards

Second, hubby never heard of a strap on or eating pussy? Really?

Third, both are liars and broke their code. Flirting IS making a play for her.

Telling him she would say yes IS making her into a slut.

Not your finest

Because this was REALLY an unfinished story.

when you brush-em-off sans lint. TK U MLJ LV NV

A chapter one. A beginning; a heckuva beginning, but JUST a beginning.i haven't had much truck with that FTDS guy but....

Get the point?

“He knows, but I don't want to rub his nose in it." – LOL, what do you call what she just did?

“he had watched and that it had upset him greatly and then she said we couldn't see each other any more.” – Huh? He KNOWS she’s doing it, presumably he knows watching will upset him, so why did he watch?

Another unfinished story.

Yet Another JPB narrative purporting to be an actual story. The "story" part is left to the reader as an exercise. . . in what??

Bob, Finish your story please.

So what happened??? I'd really like to see a part 2.

I could only give this 1 star.

He is an asshole. Any man that sleeps with a married woman is an asshole.

But to rub her husbands face in it (metaphorically speaking) is the shits. UNLESS he is into cuckolding, which he obviously was not, at least at the end.

Poor story with an even poorer ending..It appears the author didn't know how to end it.

Even JPB puts out trash sometimes. This story about an asshole and a slut is just that. He didn't know she had her husband's permission, so fuck him.

I didn't know what was going to happen next...……(what happened next?)

Why do you regularly leave stories unfinished.?

I didn't like the characters or what they did, but I did like the story in general. Where is the ending?

While the characters may not be the most likable, I've known many like them. One complaint I often see is that stories are too much alike yet write one that is different and people still are not happy! Like the song"Garden Party" 'you can't please everyone so you got to please yourself'. 5 stars

We just love the posting of a partial I complete story with no ending - again.

Well, it does allow your imagination to run wild to compensate for a a writer who doesn’t have his complete act together!

Very sad……..

Another almost very good, but very incomplete story!

Yes, your readers have imagination and some are very vivid - but????????

It is the creative writer’s responsibility to instill their thoughts, desires and ultimate path to an ending in satisfying readers!

If that does not happen on a fairly frequent basis, reader and customers start raiding away. The only long term growth is the persuasion of enticing new readers into the fold.

Full term and complete finished stories go a long way toward that goal!

But then you are the author and the deciding factor, aren’t you!

Write and publish your stories and let your readers fall where they may…….

Good thing your not writing business, sales, medical and other documents that require completeness!!!!!

Please - a finish????????

Why are most all your stories unfinished? I just don't understand the logic. Please finish them!!

You want an ending?

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Jan is now divorced. She and Bob hookup and live happily ever after.