by zenmackie
Great story. It leaves off with room for another chapter. Sort of a lady and the tiger story.
Were will they go next? Perhaps he makes her into his private submissive or maybe she becomes an Odalisque cock slave ... wherever it goes it is sure to be interesting.
Excellent imagery and prose! Proves that characters who are far from physically perfect can also be erotic. Like most "first times," the story is over too soon, but that does not make it bad.
Wonderful story. appeals to all naughty senses and encourages self esteem. Great ending too.
Wonderful!! I had tears in my eyes, Marie is so easy to relate to! Loved every word!! Please write a part 2?
As someone below me said real people story. Yes for once we didn't read those fantasy stories where the males are alpha or the females are bikini babes.
Good writing skill and very detailed descriptions.
Two thumbs up.
This story is real. There are a lot of lonely women who wind up getting tired of it and making themselves available, consciously or subconsciously, to a man they feel comfortable with. When that happens, the man is placed in a position of trust. He must not hurt her.
Nookiehunter
i admire the vividity with which this story has been spun. sounds like a real thing than just a story. well, in my case, yes! i have had a corporate s***, though not a virgin, but quite similar experience. the story really touches. great writing.
Oh I love this! The lovers are so real and easy to relate to =) Encore please!
I've not read it yet but, after reading all the comment, i am excited to. Knowing that voluptuous women like myself are getting loved is great!! Being the 20 yr old virgin :-) that i am, well, i like to think that is by choice... maybe yeh it is. I remember saying no lol well anyway, going to go read the store. I'm sure i'll love it!!!