All Comments on 'Bobby's Birthday'

Can’t wait to read what naughtiness this crew gets up to next.

Great start to the series! Hope the chapters continue …

Any more chapters coming for the wild horse ranch series? Chapter 4 did not close out the series - just wondering thanks

MORE!!!!!!!!

Awesome story can't wait to read moree of the exploits especially when the other 2 women find out about their little adventure.

We heard about these two girls even about how June was wanting him, what about Mandy? How does she know she can get June to do these things? isshe her Mistress? Lover? Can't wit to hear what all hapens at the office as well as how his wife (name?) feels about being cuckqeaned. maybe she instigated it all? what ever you do I am sure it will be another 5 star chapter(s). great job!

Agree with Gambier!

Very hot setup. Very on brand for your stories, which isn't a bad thing. It leaves things open if you want to revisit it, but it is fine as a vignette and just stops here. 5*

More!

This was a great story, I hope there will be more with these characters in the future. Also I would love to see more chapters of Wild Horse Ranch.

Loved the story and look forward to more adventures at the office. Like the previous commenter, I took was wondering if the wife set the whole thing up in order to expand their love life at home. Five stars and a favorite point!

The visuals you created in this story were so arousing as these ladies teased and tormented the boss with their sexy antics at the restaurant, in the car and especially at the creek. Damn what a lucky chap!

There was a hell of a lot of description in this, way over the top but a fun read, the one-handed readers, wink wink, will love this.

I had a smile all the time I was reading this

Oh the trials and tribulations of working with attractive women!

5

You can't just leave it there, Friend! Gotta keep this one going. He hasn't even made it home yet! Please!!!

Cheers

SAGE

I think momma-bear June is going to set up a very special Christmas Party for the just the ladies to include Dexter's wife. Then New Years weekend will be a 3 day holiday for crew at the ranch house.

Loved it, only wish it didn't have to include unfaithfulness that was not good with the wife. Even approved after the fact is too late. Too bad he didn't have a hall pass to burn off...

If only !!!

Storyman's stories are ALWAYS a great read!

That story made me pretty anxious and I didn’t enjoy it much. The women didn’t respect his wishes to be faithful, but I’ll bet they’d have issues with being cheated on.

I couldn’t give it five stars even though I really wanted to. If only you could have continued this one a little bit more working in a reveal when he gets home. In spite of the shower and efforts to cover up his infidelity, his wife can read him like a book and she knows what has happened.

"Well it's about fucking time," she berates Denver. "Those poor girls and I have been scheming together for months! But Mr. Goody-Two-Shoes wouldn't cave in and take care of those poor horny women. So which one of them finally broke you? Hmm? Don't leave anything out because I want to know all of the sordid details!" 4/5

I always enjoy everything you post. Great story!

Didn't get very far. Was hoping that someone was taking them ALL out for the boss's birthday, & it would go from there.

I agree with some of the other comments. The dynamic didn’t feel “right” in this story. He didn’t wanted to have sex with them and they forced themselves on him. A twist in the end could have changed that, but you didn’t make the twist.

I didn't like this much. No real purpose to the story and the boss put his entire career in danger by allowing the staff to act out the way they did. 2 stars **