All Comments on 'Body Language'

by Red_Jakal

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great story

Well written. Fun to read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
It's Always . . .

. . . the crazy ones that get ya'! Great read!

5/5

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
use the dictionary more

Well told but badly written. There is a difference. I keep hoping that the literary part of literotica will come through in the stories, but am constantly disappointed. Keep writing; you have talent.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Well written but needs an editor

The story was written quite well. I would have given ot 5 stars if not for the regular grammatical mistakes. They were just enough to distract from a truly enjoyable read.

NicoMaloNicoMaloover 8 years ago
Brilliant! Masterpiece!!!!!

Brilliant simply Brilliant!!!! I never knew Erotic Stories could be so funny!! I was hurting in my sides rom laughing so hard If I didn't have a hard on did have pissed myself rom Laughing!!!

ENCORE! ENCORE! ENCORE!

The_x_physiologistThe_x_physiologistover 8 years ago
Amazing story!

I love your work. As always, the reader was able to perfectly picture the 2 characters and the scene (always a good thing to visualize). The build up to the sex was amazing and the details kept me hard throughout the entire story! Please keep writing; he long breaks in between ur releases have been killing your fans!

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