All Comments on 'Body of Water Ch. 02'

But you knew I thought that. :)

This is a new concept into the whole 'non-human' category so its so exciting to read! It helps that you're a great writer as well lol =) Fantastic chapter. . . I always did like 'hot' guys *wink wink* lol.

I am so loving this story. I don't have the first clue what is going on in it but it sure has been completely hooked! LOL!

So can't wait for the next chapter to hopefully have some answers to my many questions. Fabulous writing as always Mugsy!

this is the most interesting story! I'm so excited to know the rest!!!

Ok, you have me hooked on this one. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Wow! Love this story and need more now.

I can't wait for more!

Yummy, yummy - please don't make us wait for more xx

Just as amazing the second time around. Did I already tell you that I'm actually dying a slow death waiting for the next chapter? I hope you can forgive my desperation and impatience but I really, really NEED the next chapter. I need it. Thanks for writing :)

the writing is good by my understanding is a bit fuzy.

I've read your other work and was intrigued by this, until she got finger blasted by a stranger in front of her co-workers and what I would imagine being a few security cameras.