All Comments on 'Body Swap with Sister's Boyfriend Ch. 05'

Loads of comments about how the story was slow getting to the sex and nobody has posted a comment. Fucking hilarious ha ha ha ha ha ha

I have not read any of the rest of this train wreck, but you just now got to the sex? This entire chapter read like an instruction manual for a stereo. The dialogue is god awful because no one talks like a person and say things that would make no sense for a person to say. These characters should know things so explaining one random thing in detail is just off putting. People can also use context clues to figure things out. Saying he’s a virgin then explaining he’s a virgin so he’s only ever masturbated with his hand and not actually had sex by putting his penis in a vagina is so unnecessary and boring and you basically did that for a paragraph. Less is more.