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"Yes, I know that you would... which is why I am taking you with me."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoI did not feel their urgency to mate or their passion for eachother. You need someone to help you with the erotic scenes. But I still like the story :)
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoI like that it NOT all about Sex, Kudos. But you can go into a Little more details when it comes to the sex scenes. But I Hope you will continue with this story, don't stop because of a few Nay Sayers.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoI was interested in this story in the beginning, but I just don't feel like I am getting enough substance from it. There was little to no passion and it left a lot of questions about them being bonded and bred.
cantfightfatealmost 9 years agoNot at all romantic but not at all animalistic either. Just in and out, done. I was hoping for a bit more passion.
Interested in where you're going, though.
