All Comments on 'Bonding with Mom'

Really was a great story can't wait for the next part

Do us all a favor and get someone to edit. Thev story has great potential, but I had to stop reading because it was poorly written.

Not bad.

Keep at it and work on improving but yes I'd like to see this contuined. Not bad at all.

it's good!!

It could use some polishing up as far as grammar goes but it's a good start to a much larger story. I can see you bringing the girl's Aunt Jenny into the story for a wonderful foursome. I don't see a need to introduce a man even though I am one. Keep it all female and keep it in the family. Good job.

A lovely story -- please bring us more of it! Five from me -- thank you.

Thanks for the story.

That was sooo hot ! It's one of my favorite fantasies, unfortunately one I never got to fulfill with my own mother. We did however check off quite a few others on our list.

Thank You

Darkone57

Five stars keep going!

And as I always say, the family that comes together stays together.

thank you that was very hot and wish I could enjoy my twins

The twins started sucking faster as they approached orgasm? GodDAMN!!! Thanks for sharing!

Holy sh!t! Damn, that was hot!!! I've never really been into lesbian sex before, but that story was amazing! Grammatically, it needed a little work, but the story itself was could lend itself to a multitude of possibilities. As this was the first of your stories I've read, I will be reading however many more you have submitted. Find an editor, do what you have to do, but please, DO NOT stop writing! 5⭐