All Comments on 'Boudoir'

I definitely need more of this story. Word choice was excellent and the characters felt real. I need to know how the story ends.

Thank you so much for writing such an awesome piece. Personally, I would love to see at least one more chapter. This was amazingly hot!!

Please do so and soon. Great story telling.

Longer than two pages too.

The title says it all and you absolutely cannot leave us that way.

Part two at least is a must.

definitely needs a chapter 2

Why cant they make porn movies like this ? With feeling and love and sex ? Need to start a company and make movies . Loved it S.O.B.

The surprise of love repressed and finely released is such a sensual thing.

I hope there is a chapter II to see where you take this.

Only after you finish Woman's Studies.

Please!

What a perfect story of brother/sister incest. Well paced and not too long.

I knew generally where this might lead, but the ending was truly a nice surprise. Well written and will look for a sequel.

This story definitely needs a chapter 2. Amazing story.

Loved this one. That poor

fiance never had a chance.

Hope his tux is a rental......

This was the best storie I've read in a long time.

That was too hot. I'm not sure if I love you or them more.

While I'd be interested in reading more, I can't fathom a sequel topping this. Damn that was good.

Definitely deserving of an encore. So, please consider a chapter 2. Excellent character set up to continue.

Different and good compared to the rest. I enjoyed it and would read more.

You never know who is in front of you until you start clicking away with the camera and directing your subject. Every woman wants the camera to see what no one else sees thinking that it's a secret shared by her and the photographer. Whether it's a breast or her bottom or her pussy doesn't matter, to her she is exposing herself to another, someone her boyfriend or husband or her parents will never know about.

This was excellent... and hopefully just the start of something with the potental to stand heads and shoulders (an maybe even nipples) above the (taboo) crowd. The prose is tight, the premise fully acceptable bordering to real and both the story and the potential storyline to come as entertaining as they are hot... as long as, of course, you can maintain the sharpness and quality. Please try.

Five stars - author and story favorited - off to read the rest of your stuff now.

Please, continue with this narrative. Extremely erotic!

So, she was ready to go for the gold, then found out that there was a tarnish on it, that it was really highly polished brass.

I don't know what you'd put in a sequel, quite frankly. It could only go one of three ways: 1) she calls off the wedding and they enjoy each other in many and various ways, or; 2) she marries the guy and lives a humdrum, barely satisfying life, or; 3) she marries the guy - and gets to enjoy both of them in the future.

Hmmm, what a conundrum.

I loved your story. It was a very different approach to most of the stories in this category. It has a lot of different elements that could be developed - her not getting married and staying with her brother, her continuing to get married, but also continuing her love affair with her brother... But I could also see a very intriguing line developing where her and her brother’s intimacy leads to her pregnancy, given how many women prepare for their weddings and honeymoon by going off birth control and often syncing their wedding with their most fertile times. As I have always enjoyed an impregnation fetish, I would really love to see you explore that story line, weaving it into a continued love affair between them, either clandestine or as a couple.

This was amazing and hot. And simple but complicated. Please give us a sequel. But personally I wouldn’t like if you made her end up with both James and her brother. Just her brother will do for me.

Hell yes to a sequel it rockes and so well written

It appears your readers gave spoken and a sexual is demanded. I agree 😈

So more would be appreciated, and being an appreciative reader might I suggest maybe the brothers girlfriend discoverint little sis as well?

She has to be known knocked up...

I think a sequel is in order! First her wedding night and then whatever you choose for the finish. You have endless possibilities to work with and with you imagination they will be delightful.

Don't finish it here , more chapters please

I thought your long-winded style would bore me, but the details are actually what made the story! Keep it up

as awesome as this story is it leaves you hanging and wondering what really happened next. It deffinately needs a sequel and maybe even a no.3

Depending on how yiu go with it, further exploration right down the road, does she marry or not, is she happy, does her future /husband like the idea of being his brother-in-law's cuck? I'm just spitballin here. It's your story, take it where you like, but I found it very erotic and would like more

Let's hope she gets hitched and Bro becomes the teacher. A lil' on the side. One hole left and don't do that silly 50 Shades of Gay. Sounds like he could be the real teacher.

Liked the characters and premise. Hot story.

Keep it going!

This is a great love story. It needs another chapter. I really want to know if she marries the other guy. No matter what happens with the marriage I hope it is aTigger that makes her pregnant with her first child.

I loved every word.

Very well constructed and formed story that has left me wanting more. Much, much more.

I have been reading stories on this site for years. This? By far? Is one of the best I have read so far.

You really need to finish this one, or continue it as your mind wanders. Either way? There needs to be a part 3 at the very least.

The scene, character introduction and buildup were spot on. In that? The story draws you in, in that it is relatable and something far different that main stream boring porn.

If the brother/sister part was not there? This would become a movie for all the bored housewife's that lust for some adventure in their live's.

Gifted writer, awesome story. I would love more!

You must keep going

Great story. Loved it. More can only satisfy their desires of their relationship towards one another. Excellent read.

This is really good. Got my interest. It would be a shame end it where it is. Keep it up. I will come back again for more of your stories.

I think you have just opened the door to a very saucy story. I loved it but, there are now some loose ends to tie up. Does Emily call the wedding off because she really is in love with her brother? Do they end up as a "couple" and make babies. Are there other sisters or perhaps mom who would also like to share him?

So many hot and sexy probabilities that you really should address for us keen readers.

..yes a series.

Next one, the "wedding night" session.

Maybe include a sexy aunt or sisters best friend in another story.

This is very close in a lot of ways to what is happening now wity my sister and us teasing each other. Grown and aware of all of it I think it’s all fun and games. Read big this makes me hope for more from her and you. Please take the time to make a part 2 to this. It was truly incredible and a joy to read.

She needs to be very roughly cornhole. She should be crying from the punishment after he bust his balls in her asshole. She wants to treated like a dirty little whore so her brother should do just that.

Great story.

5*, definitely vote for a sequel

for being only 2 pages this story was amazing..look forward to next chapter =0)

The story was fabulous. I feel you should explore it further. Very well done. Thank you very much!

I absolutely loved this story, it definitely needs a sequel. I'm a sucker for brother and sister incest love stories and would love to see a happily ever after between the two of them.

is badly and greatly needed for this hot sibling romance in bloom

i can see it now. great set up for a three-some story but then again this story has a good pivot point. may go anywhere, so plz show us where you will take us with your story.

I spotted a spelling error in the first paragraph (actually it was a plural used instead of a singular), it put me straight into Editor mode and took me out of the story. I plan to go back and read the whole thing.

You use odd sentence structure that i'm not sure is grammatically correct (" , and" for example) or commas in off places. You should, in theory, be able to remove the bit between two commas and the sentence still makes sense. "He walked, with gusto, to the chair. She knew, all to well, what he was capable of." (Just some examples).

Also too many 'and's in a sentence can make it dull and hard to read and drag a little bit. Promise i will read the whole thing before I rate though. Hope this comes across as constructive and not just arsey :)

...I'm a strong believer in finishing what you started.

Then again, now you're started too things. It's either a catch-22 or a win/win, as long as you choose to do something.

.... we need a sequel! With less than week to the wedding, we need to know what they do. What does she tell her fiancee? What do they tell their parents, family and friends? You easily have at least two chapters to go, one for the breakup and one for what the siblings do long term.

I agree with the trilogy idea; ch 2 is the break-up and fall-out and ch 3 is bro & sis tidying up and getting the wheels of their life together going.

This was surprisingly epic! I love stories that involve photography and (or especially) seduction. This was a grand slam home run! Perhaps a bit short. But amazing and enticing the the final line! I also have photographed but unlike Tyler, I did sleep with my subject. I can't say enough how much I loved this story! I'm hooked on the characters too! What can I say except, PLEASE WRITE MORE CHAPTERS! I want to know so much more!

While i'd like some more of "Woman's Studies"- i'd settle for more of THIS.

One of my VERY few five-star ratings.

Great start. This story has legs and screams for sequels..

Whether you do a sequel or not, the story was awesome. The only (minor) complaint is that I would have liked a better description of the sister. I had just finished watching an episode of Stranger Things (not done with season 2 yet, so no spoilers) and just kept picturing the older sister when reading the story. Not a bad visual by any means, but I'd still like to know how you intended her to look.

Still, five stars all the way. I feel like the Incest/Taboo section has been kinda weak lately, but this story definitely raised the bar.

Honestly, this was a lot of fun for a quick read. Please turn this into a series!!!

It's really good. Please make a sequel maybe longer this time

I very much liked your story. I would love to read a sequel, or perhaps a series! One small criticism is with the part when she is slipping the dress off or undressing in general. This could have been a bit more descriptive. I do realize this was suppose to be quick story and that during this scene he was not yet seduced; instead he was trying to remain professional.

Thanks for the story, I will keep an eye out for more.

This was great, a series would be fantastic, just a sequel would be ok but....

Very good so far. Long sequels later become boring. Another few pages will be good for continuation of this beautiful start.

I really enjoyed reading this and encourage you to write more. Perhaps they have to sneak around for a while to hide it from the new husband.

Love to read more.

Extremely erotic and a great end. Would love to see their relationship develop to something more with a sequel!

God, that story was breathtakingly hot! I have no complaints at all. Everything about it was amazing: the characters, the writing, and, of course, the sex. A sequel might be interesting, but I think the story came to a great conclusion and that a sequel might ruin the ending. I like it that the reader is left wondering whether or not Emily will decide to go ahead and get married. It leaves a nice sense of mystery.

I read this while waiting for the overdue chapter of Women’s Studies. Spectacular!! I was blown away and on edge the entire time! I would love to read a sequel, but please finish Women’s Studies! It’s been SO long since your last chapter. Keep it up !! Thank you !

I liked this tale, well thought out, well written

5* thanks

"Vanilla! Damn her! The gauntlet had been thrown down."

You can't challenge a man like that and expect to get something average! Though after saying it, I sadly feel that most men are probably boring.

Wonderfully written. Erotic and exquisite all at the same time. Please provide more.

Loved it. Really loved it. Do please write more.

Please continue, this story has a lot more mileage in it

1) Reheasal dinner: Desert = vanilla ice cream, cherry on top, wink and a tearful brother/sister ride back home, etc

2) Wedding day: Uncertain bride, outraged groom, protective brother who soothes her fears with promise that their love can continue even after married.

3) Marriage goes ahead on shaky grounds, ends on shaky grounds, sister and her daughter come to live with brother

Etc.

As a photographer who’s shot many boudoir sets I can relate to a lot of this story. Your writing is excellent and the dynamic between the pair is exquisite. Please create a series for them because it would be well worth the ride following them. So many authors here have written amazing stories and then left everyone hanging and disappear. Please don’t do that. Share more of your creativity.

The imagery and the richness of detail make this story a joyful delight of artistic debauchery.

Quite frankly, I'd now eagerly and willingly accede to Emily circumcising me with her bare teeth, if that was her kink right now.

Spectacular story!

You should keep your sisters the same in your stories! Keep going with this!

Just enjoyed Women's Studies #12 and the Fenyx Lounge and decided to revisit Budoir - and the eroticism still reeks. So if I could rate again and give you some P.S.-inspired motivation to pick up the thread of this tale again, I would. Guess I'll just have to whine at you here in the commentary... again.

Need episode TWO!

Emily should become Tigger's assistant - and create the mostly sexually tense setting for all future shoots - it would be sexy as hell - and business would boom as well!

Very well written, extremely hot!

The ending was a bit odd. Very abrupt. My only complaint. It was awesome!!!

Wow, this with best story I've read in a good while! I am a retired photographer, and you painted a very beautiful, erotic and believable scene. There are many directions this could go, I can't wait see where you take this...... I'm sure it will be HOT.

Thanks for a great story.

I stumbled onto you today and I am impressed. I read two of your stories and intend to read more. Well done indeed.

I've read many stories here. This is easily is a top three. So well crafted.

So this was supposed to be standalone, never to receive a sequel? While the end was quite abrupt (you really wanted to keep this one shorter, didn't you), I don't know... Why couldn't you have just sucked at writing? ;)

I can't believe you haven't already added a second chapter.

Great story well written, but the ending left more questions than answers. Love to see a follow-up.

Come on! I'm hanging here. What happened next?

Please consider a sequel to this gem, it's far too good a story to just leave hanging.

I hope you continue this story

More PLEASE!!!!!!

Needs a little more to connect them as actual siblings rather than old friends to make it worth the kink tag, but I liked the setup & the buildup, and going against the grain here I don't think it needs a followup - I think it just needs a bit more detail about their connection *during* the piece as noted, and the end would still be a good place to stop. Grand drama with their family etc in a followup wouldn't take the same tone, I think.

But for goodness sake don't stop now.

Part 2 please - and just don't leave it too long.

Well worth 5 Stars !

Rapier

Seriously, this was an awesome story. One word for what this should be "Series". At least one sequel, but there is definitely potential for more, depending on where you take the story.

So please, I beg you for a sequel. Soon!

Great story! I vote with the ones asking for a series - at least a follow up

Seriously, sequel please.

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