All Comments on 'Boyfriend Lost'

you start of with saying that your boy friend has lost you but just doesn't know it yet. You also say that he is knocking down a 9 figure income, in my book that means over $100 million a year, doing trouble shooting for some company. That puts his income in the top 0.05 percent of all top income earners in the world. You also say that you are not dumb enough to jeopardize that.

In the end you say that you could never go back to your boyfriend or any other white guy after your time with these guys. So in the beginning you wouldn't be dumb enough to blow off $100 mil a year and in the end you do just that, what type of logic is that?

this was well told and well written. I am not going to cry foul, but would like to see her tell her current boy friend its over. At this point I would have to say she lost a nice man and he lost a sexy lady to lust, so what happen when the boyfriend comes back in a few days and she has had time to think? if she was so easily taken by Tom and his friends.... she didn't care for boyfriend anyway and he's better off knowing now than later.

the story telling is so idiotic --- it has no more value than for masturbation purposes

as we walk around, in many places, there are more and more white trash women wheeling fatherless babies around, like many black women before them

life actually immitates art to a higher degree than we want to admit --- even if some people's grasp of reality is fussy,,,

it's total idiocy to say some "smart woman" is going to sleep with multiple big-dicked black brothers over some decent guys who's making tons of money, are able to provide a good life for the wife and their offspring

what's so great about rubbing penises and vagina together, or one vagina filled to the brim with "gallons" of semenal fluids? lol nothing! sheer idiocy on those who actually pursue such activities and sheer idiocy for authors/writers to say they are just great

in reality, it's mostly dirty, unsafe, and painful (physically and diseas wise)

Your writing is great, don't know what the other people are on about. It's superb, horny, and wicked!

Keep it up.

Very good story. I enjoyed the story while my dido took care of sexual need.

Hot,hot and more hot....Love the thought that Marge is in control and knows that shes a black cock slut....please keep writing

mmmmmmm great story, 4 hot guys and one hot white pussy, kept my dick hard and throbbin.

The essence of erotica, at least for me, is being allowed into the protagonist's head, particularly through what they say, and being allowed to share their ecstasy.You do an excellent job at this, Lynn! I can see why you might consider yourself an 'opinionated bitch'; Margie is a little pushie, but hey, it's a story! perhaps a few things to quibble about concerning the plot, but that's not what it's about, right! It's a well-told erotic story! And along the bell-shaped curve of any human characteristic, we call women at the high end of the sexuality spectrum a 'slut'- however for those of us men at that high end, a slut is the most treasured partner on the planet - so a lot of us feel that 'slut' is the highest form of praise there is! And if mutual respect is also included, that's heaven!

And thank you for a GREAT story!

tom dicki and harry

can't you be a bit more original????

Boyfriend dodged a billet. Thankfully he is free of the slut and will find a better woman. Good luck to her, she’ll be on her back for the rest of her life with more men than she thought possible. Catch at your local health department getting another shot for her latest STD

Loved this story...thought it broke away from the standard gangbang stories which made it much much hotter to read. Now all we need is this made into a video and this would be a perfect world.