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by Sean Renaud

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Details?

A good start to the story, but you need to supply details! How old are those guys? 20s? Any hair on those delicious chests? When they blow each other, do their noses bottom out in bushy pubes?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Proof reading

A short read but would benefit from a good review for grammar and spelling issues.

Rwa4768Rwa4768almost 5 years ago
Good

Your story could use a few more details and build up, but it is a good start.

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