All Comments on 'Brand New Key'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
All your work is engaging

I rather hoped this one would go on a little longer

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Missed opportunity

Given the title of this story, I was somewhat expecting a reference somewhere to the song "Combine Harvester"

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
dayum!

that was so so so so so good! Really dreamy, excellent drop and excellent rhythm/flow it just sucked you in just like she sucked him in to her trance! Really enjoyed it, thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great writing - very erotic story

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