All Comments on 'Brandi and Kelly Ch. 03'

A really nice story so far. I'm impatiently waiting for the next part. Please hurry with it.

This story is makin me seriously consider becoming a sub... Slave.... Whichever label you want to put on it.

I love how you keep her emotional turmoil but still manage to get her to give in to what she really wants. Great job! You are truly talented

So Brandi neither found Kelly nor remained a virgin. Quite a nice ending.

There is no way I can leave it like that! Brandi will be rescued somehow, Gary

WTF happened to Safe, Sane and CONSENSUAL ?

Whilst I find BDSM very erotic this story is just making me angry, I’m out.

Im not down, it's too rapey and forced, and usually I'm fine with thta as a kink, but she's too sympathetic and vulnerable; it makes it feel like she really doesn't want or deserve this. I feel terrible.