All Comments on 'Breaking Clichés Ch. 07'

by MrIllusion

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fuckasaurusfuckasaurusover 7 years ago

I think I would most enjoy option 1. This was fantastic, as usual.

MrIllusionMrIllusionover 7 years agoAuthor
:-)

Thanks for the vote and compliment!

bigdnc13bigdnc13over 7 years ago
Option 1 would be my choice too

I very much liked the way the first seven chapters were written, but it's your call. Nicely done.

MrIllusionMrIllusionabout 7 years agoAuthor

I'm not sure I'll write the second part to the vampire story.

I do have at least another adventure for John and Scarlett though, but that may come later. Thanks to all of you who stuck all this way!

Gibbo68mustangGibbo68mustangalmost 7 years ago
Option 1 or 2

Enjoying this series and your writing style. Prefer my erotica with some background story and you have got it just right so far. Really not sure about our heroes "darkest fantasy" as it would take it in a direction that would alienate many readers, but otherwise would put this series near the top of my list of best on this site.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

option #3

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