All Comments on 'Breaking Lance Ch. 08'

Sad memories of Anthony.

like the way you keep bringing up glimpses of his 'soft' side.

REALLY hot with bobby. But vince acted like such an asshole! Wow, he made me really not like him. Lance was a misguided kid. Vince helped in some ways but he stripped the kid bare (ok pun intended :), emotionally especially, while doing it and then rejects him in such a cold and harsh manner. he has some Serious making up to do.

This story is awesome BUT the problematic punctuation (especially apostrophes where they shouldn't be and commas where you should have full stops) is minimizing my enjoyment. Maybe think about getting an editor.