All Comments on 'Breaking the Curse'

This was so much more than the garbage usually dished out at LIT. Such a sensitive tale of lust and love with no frills to make us want to criticise. A tale put together so well that, while it can stand alone, the reader will not be offended with a few more chapters. Outstanding writing SCORPIO! A loyal fan, Pete.

Covered a lot of ground starting with parents who cause more trouble with names than anything I've seen, makes you want to just smack a few of them, what the hell were you thinking!). Add an ode to everymans fantasy with two women. A talented writer to tie it all together with enough heat to warp my monitor and we have a fine story. Thank you for another really good tale.

I loved the story, but you made one error; the ladies wore no panties, but then suddenly one had a shiny red thong when dancing.

Sorry to point that out, otherwise it hit all of the right notes.

The only thing that would have made it perfect would have been a little relaxation in the conversational style. And a slightly less smug tone.

Otherwise wonderful. And hopefully further adventures will be forthcoming.

Excellent story though he seemed to be a bit of a jerk at one point the way he talked. Wouldn't mind be stranded at an airport if this sort of thing happened - what fun it would be. Love the way the two women put the rich guy in his place - just shows you - money won't get you everything you want if you flaunt it. There are several men who have what sounds like a girls name and have coped with it - John Wayne was called Marion - unfortunately also the name of my Ex wife and I went to college with a guy called Beverley which was also the name of my eldest daughter. In the end it turned in to a real blessing for him - just imagine - would it have done so had he not got snowed in???? All you need is that one bit of luck and suddenly your whole life changes and hopefully for the better!!!

You have a gift, THANKS FOR SHARING IT !