All Comments on 'Breast Man Chronicles Ch. 02'

your chapter 2 was exhilerating and exciting-your descriptions had me actually picturing what was going on in each scene-reminded me a lot of my first meeting with my wife of 27 years

I know this is a work of fiction (if not I am even more jealous) but Davy had a loving most of us can only dream of. You have put it together so well. Loved it all.

You reach an impas now. Do these two proceed forward exclusively or will they share their pleasures with others... either way i'm there to enjoy it...,

The descriptions alone could paint so many pictures. I loved this chapter. Please continue to write and upload stories here.

This is a lovely story, with good character development, an engaging plot, but Chapter 2 leaves things up in the air, and the reader is left puzzled as to how it will all end. Will Dave and Florie come to true love for ever after, or not? Will the story end up as a Romance, or not? Whatever happens, this story needs to be completed.