All Comments on 'Breathless Ch. 03'

Glad to see another posting from you. Your stories, no matter the subject, are always first rate.

The story is building so well. I'm very much looking forward to the rest of it.

And that was quite a cliff hanger you left us with.

Which is why it is addictive. We have the undeniable chemistry between Sadie and Vlad, mixed with his unhappy marriage to an elf and his determination to remain true to his vows. We have the growing problem with vamps. We have Lord Frost and his obvious desire to have Sadie under his control. And now we have a mystery re Sadie's birth/heritage or background that Melissa is just beginning to uncover. Throw in the gruesome Bart, Officer Devlin and his desire to be undead, a lonely wraith, and much much more, and it's all incredibly fascinating. Loving every minute of this story!

Another very cool story; but leaving us hanging like that. you are evil (alpaca!)

A very good story so far. I really cant wait to see more, and with the short times between the chapters i am sure i dont have long to wait till the next.

Keep up the good work!

What?!?Whats not rite?!?!What?!

I like how when you put the setting in an alternate universe you still reference other stories. Torrie was a nice touch EA.

The stpry is absolutely extraordinary ...... Just pushes me to jump immediately to the next chapter