All Comments on 'Breeding Ground Pt. 01'

Can't wait to find the secrets of her dream and what the brother is hiding!!

Some - but not all - of your questions will be answered soon. Hopefully early next week. Thanks! :)

Really good! I think this is going in a supernatural direction and I don't read those kinds of stories, preferring reality...but, If I'm right, it's too late! You've already sucked me in. I'm intrigued. There's no way I can walk away from this story now. I'm eagerly awaiting the next part. Masterful! Thank you!

... headed in that direction. :-) Part 2 should be out early this coming week -- hopefully before Thanksgiving. Thanks much for the nice comment and I hope you enjoy the rest of it.

Let's get on with it, shall we?? I'm dying here. ;-)

Part 2 is up now. :-)

VERY HOT!!!

fuck that was intense....I had to pause to breathe...

Thanks for the nice compliment!

Definitely not your typical incest initiation tale. The dreams give a nice psychological catalyst to Sara seeking out Rick. Even the subtle telegraphs work - not in your face, but you can tell there’s going to be a pay off in later chapters.