All Comments on 'Breeding my Sister's Wife Ch. 11'

by JHErotica

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Mango2021Mango2021about 2 months ago

Like where this is headed

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Now we're talking! Brother needs to stay out of that hot assed hot tub. That hot hot water is killing tons of his swimmers. Now let's hope both ladies catch, due to the oops. Brother really, subconsciously, pulled out too slow on purpose. Let's face it. Alena wants Kate bred as much as she wants it herself. Or maybe Alena is throwing a kinky twist into the story. Alena could secretly be taking birth control to dominate Kate into breeding with her brother. Now that would be a real kink in the garden hose. Closet bi wife tricking an incest baby into brother & sister wife. Ladies, just go ahead & propose to Brother & make him y'alls hubby. Keep these chapters rolling. 5☆

JHEroticaJHEroticaabout 2 months agoAuthor

Thanks for reading my story! Part 12 is already out on my patreon, link above!

PappasleazePappasleazeabout 2 months ago

you are doing great with this. Love where this could this might be headed. Both pregnant at same time?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

I have a feeling they're both getting pregnant, or somehow only Kate ends up getting bred by the end of this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

I can see both these girls pregnant and all 3cliving together

collin4xxxcollin4xxxabout 2 months ago

Let’s hope he didn’t pull out in time! Really hoping to read about both girls being pregnant, and that they drop their pretenses and move him into their home, their bed and their life as their full-time partner, lover, husband and babies daddy - these two babies and a couple future ones.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

The brother and sister need to have a proper sexual intercourse in a missionary position as Alena watches.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Really good, but it feels like the story is written by 2 people. One who uses fancy enough words, and then, another one who gets names mixed up. Has happened twice in third chapter. Missing words in most chapters, I'd prefer the author proof read before posting

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Love where this seems to be heading!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Damn!! Those last few paragraphs were so descriptive and hot and intense!!...5 more stars bro

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Ethical boundary crossing? How the fuck did you decide that was even possible. Please tell me your brain punished you with an epic migraine. Obviously not enough to stop you. Wow that's dumb as fuck. So are your stories. I have no idea how you justify this shit in your head and I don't want to.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

The spelling alone is so atrocious I can't follow the story. Mix and match names. A trainwreck of errors for descriptors. I'm out.

Tom MandyTom Mandyabout 2 months ago

He could've gotten his sister pregnant with precum

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Erotica writer as a hobby. Interested in a bunch of different kinds, mostly anything with ethical boundary crossing and play. Open to commissions and writing prompts!