All Comments on 'Bree's Grift'

I'm glad she beat him and got away

Good story but she's got to run fast and far.

I really enjoyed this story. Thank you!

This is by far the best story on this site. Well done to you, Knott. Well goddamn done. I have used this site for 8 years now and never have I come across a more thrilling adventure.

Congratulations to you. If you haven't started it already, you have a great career selling erotica on Kindle and so on ahead of you. This story is just the right mix of sympathetic bad girl, dangerous adventure and frankly described, very specific and deeply experienced sex to make this a page-turner that didn't leave me feeling cheated at the end. Bree could fill a series.

Some grammar goofs that you or a second pair of eyes could easily catch on a reread...

I thoroughly enjoyed your story. So glad Bree got away but what was the tongue thing that felt so good? Inquiring minds want to know!

She should of killed all four of them and make it look like a gang killing. They will always be looking for her.

You could develop her character(s) more to lock in readers.

Well written and the best story I have read so far.

Great work!!

Absolutely excellent characterization.

One item of note: my assumption based on Jake's Texas drawl would be that his reference to Caleb as son would be just an idiomatic reference to a younger man, and not an indication of actual parentage. Maybe Bree doesn't know that, though.

Love the premise and most of the sex. The bad guys should have fucked her ass, atm, swallow. Otherwise a great story.