All Comments on 'Brenda and Linda'

A very well-written and original take on an old theme. I admit to being skeptical at the beginning of the story--God knows we've read enough of the twins and triplet stories in this genre. This, though, was lighthearted, took the theme places it's never been, and left me smiling at the end.

Bravo!

Loved the Story and the way they Got Him to Agree to the three of them being together. Wonderful Story

It was full of twists and turns and thoroughly enjoyable.

But you always do. Please also continue, A Passing Fancy, I am still waiting for that one, after second chapter, you just left it hanging.

I like funny or stories with lot of stress and tension, but sometimes you write just incidents. like this that and that happend, which seems unreal sometime, but mostly you write very entertaining, like this one was absolutly great, and romantic and about relations. Keep it up :)

A great fantasy, and a very erotic story. The author is a good story teller along with a good writer. Well done

If the twins can completely accept an equal relationship with him maybe it could work. I'm not sure I could live with the manipulation. Going on a date and making out and then finding out they had swapped would piss me off a bit. If they both wanted to have a relationship they should have said so a long time ago. He should have been included rather than being kept on the outside of the arrangement. They finally got to that point. I think I would have discretely marked one of them with an indelible pen where they wouldn't notice it, maybe behind an ear. Letting go of that issue it was a fun story. It would have been nice to have a steamy sex scene with the 3 of them.

ZZZZZZZ.

well it mght be... but its hard to tell. I think it was good but that was then .,.. so I cant be sure .

These sorts of wives/ twins or triplets stories have been done before.... the wretched author JPB did one of these dumbs stories. So did Ohio and I think postscriptor.

ALL of these stories are SEXIST. Suppose the twins were Guys and they were taking turns fucking some dumb as shit wife... laughing and joking and playing head games. Everyone would be screaming about how horrible these guys were.

But in everyone of these mindlessly stupid plots always have the guys thinking with the cocks... "hey maybe I am fucking the other sister but who cares... its new pussy right?"

I liked it, Keep Writing.

Now for the rest of the story:

As said before, boring (zzzzzzzzzzzz........)

I have to say, that if both feel what the other feels, and both are identical, what difference does it make if he lives with both? It's the same woman basically. Now if the Mom feels everything too..... Maybe that's why she gave up men after the first time? Well, it's just fiction!

What a great fantasy. Now back to the real world.

UGH

Years ago. It was easy for me to tell them apart. Now I've got a new twin I date. Not so easy with these ladies but we don't mind, it' s all OK with the 3 of us.

And they couldn't be trusted. They used the fact that they were identical to cheat. One was single, the other was with me, supposedly. I found out they regularly switched so my girlfriend could cheat with other men. Bitches. Never trust identical twins.

For something to actually happen in ANY of your stories. You seem so afraid of offending anyone, or of getting negative feedback that you write really tame inoffensive stories. Don't get me wrong, they're well written and all, but all so predictable. Try injecting some life or unexpected plots into your stories. Please don't take this as a personal attack on your writing, but as just my opinion on your stories. You write well, but I wish you would stop holding back, and go nuts once in a while. Who knows, you might enjoy the freedom.

and have them both cheat on him and ruin his life...unless of course he has a double barrel shot gun!

I loved that story, Light and fun

I was dating a twin, one night we went ot and her sister went with her boyfriend somewhere else. Now they always said if one had an extreme emotion the other could tell. So on this date we got out of the theatre when Shari my girlfriend suddenly jerked sideways and her face looked red like it had been slapped or punched. Either way, Shari tells me her sister was very afraid all of a sudden. By this time I learned to trust her feelings, I could also tell them apart because Shari had a small birthmark on her left hand right by the cuticle of her ring finger. You wouldn't notice unless you knew about it and were looking for it, and no I never let on how I told them apart. Anyway, Shari has me driving like a bat out of hell telling me to hurry. Now since I was a paramedics of I had registered my car as an emergency response vehicle. The ambulance core had no problem with that since it was a four wheel drive Toyota 4Runner and I got through anything. They also paid for me to have the full off-road addition put in, like a winch up front and back, bottom plating to protect the underside if I had to go through forestry or any kind of off-road driving. I didn't mind as they kicked in gas addition also due to the weight making it more of a guzzler. I was fully stocked, just didn't have a stretcher with me. Anyway, the way Shari was talking I put the lights on and went code three, also notified control that while I was out of command area I was responding to a reported emergency and requested PD join us when I gave them the address. My core captain got on the radio and told me to go to tach two, she then asked and was given everything I knew to this point. As she was Shari's G-D mother she believed me. We got to the address and found her boyfriend on the ground and her just barely holding her own against three pigs, I mean punks, that thought they would have some fun with her. My getting there with lights and sirens ( code 3 remember ) followed by PD not twenty seconds behind and an ambulance to boot, they tried to run. PD got them while I first checked the boyfriend who had as near as I could tell two stab wounds and a fracture to the skull. Lanie Shari's sister had bruises on her face and a possible cracked rib. I stabilized the boyfriend and loaded him onto the ambulance, Lanie went with him and I took shari to the hospital to be with her sister. Now in the ER they saw Shari had what looked like the same injuries and thought I may have caused them. When we both told them the exact same story they just shrugged and let us be. Lanie wound up marrying the boyfriend, but Shari and I broke up as it wasn't meant to be. We are still great friends and their mother was like a mother to me as well. When she passed I was still in the military but got emergency leave to go home for the funeral. Afterward Shari and I had a talk and she told me she was dating someone and thought he was going to pop the question right before her mom passed away. Well after a month he did and I was invited and asked to be a groomsman at the wedding. I accepted and asked her if her betrothed could tell them apart. She said he usually could, and when I clued him in he never made a mistake again. Now after your story I wonder back to the times we had made love if Lanie could tell, and no there was no way in hell I was asking that question.

Thanks for the offering.....

Double barreled shotgun.... because there are two of them. Funny line.

I gave the story five stars for its ingenuity.

I had a different situation. My wife cheated, I dumped her ass and her dad told their whole family to not blame me for ANYTHING... that it was all HER. Three months later, I got the cherries of two of her younger sisters. My ex was furious when she found out that they'd moved in and taken her place. When they showed her their baby bumps, she finally realized that she'd fucked up.

Hope he has a great job. twins in his bed , now he has a double set of twins. Go from three mouths to feed to seven. maybe he'll get one set of girls and one set of boys. I still envy his ass.

Good story. He's going to have both hands full.

But nothing like the one that this guy is going to have for the rest of his life.

Signed: BTW

Nice twist! You made Corsican Sisters :)

Sounds like double your pleasure, but more likely to be double trouble. Amazingly, you smoked out a few commenters who, of course, have actually lived your fantasy.

What a terrible problem to have!

I enjoyed it, but I need to think it was not hard to write because it is every man's fantasy. Somehow, I suspect reality is more challenging, but this is fiction so what the heck? Good luck to him. He's going to need it.

WTF is up with the dot dot dots? wouldn't a single peck at a comma key be better than three periods? Did you not take Literature or some type of English Lit. class while being educated?

Damm, what a fantasy!!!

The "games" described early in the story are so disrespectful of others no one would waste their time on either bitch.