All Comments on 'Brett and Elizabeth Ch. 03'

very nice keep up the good work i enjoyed this story

Yes! You have to continue! Seriously this is one of the best stories I have read in a while...no wonder you and Mused are my favorites!!!

thank you chargergirl for another great read. You have already set up the next story w/ Dave and Ali so please continue.I know many of us will be waiting for that one.

if you continued with Dave and Alicia's story, then you could also do a mini-update for Brett and Elizabeth.

Loved the story, one of the best ive read on this site ever. Please keep it going

You've a perfect transition for Alicia and David. Please go with it and give us updates with Brett and Elizabeth. Please keep more coming!

Please continue!

Your characters have such genuine character. Poor Brett, he must have endured so much physical and emotional pain at the hands of his father.

The possibility of a story featuring Dave and Alicia sounds great. Those two have such obvious chemistry.

What a great story and well written. I loved the Brett and Elizabeth story as much as I loved the Kate and Connor story. As far as Dave and Alicia go you left the Brett and Elizabeth story with a good opening for Dave and Alicia's story to begin, I would love to see the story continue about them of course with Brett and Elizabeth being a part of it too. Hey maybe after that you could bring Kate and Connor into the story and have one big story with all your characters. Your writting keeps getting better and better keep up the good work.

I loved your story. The David and Alicia tale would be equally as good, no doubt. Go for it! Thanks for writing.

Great story. One of the better ones. The characters are very believable and feel so real. You have exceptional talent.

Love your stories. Well-written, far superior to most on this website. I love that your characters are all good people who know the meaning of love, loyalty, and commitment. Send us more, more, more!

You know how to keep a readers attention and with a very good story. I have read also the first chapter of David and Ali and I really hope you continue on the happy ending. Thanks

As usual, your stories are great! I can't wait to read the final installment of Dave & Alicia!

Although I usually like a higher sex-to-plot ratio than this story, I loved the way the story unfolded.

I'm off to read the rest of chargergirl's contributions.

Cheers

Shiny

I ussualy don't like stories that have to do with pregnacy And that arn't only about sex, But i loved this story.

I'm just devastated that Elizabeth can't have any more children - Brett deserved to become a father in his own right, and it would have helped cement his relationship with his sister. Meanwhile, the chances of the same thing happening to Dave and Alicia is minimal - let's have them get together, laid and (in her case) pregnant...

It was a beautiful sibling love story. I really appreciated your writing style and found your characters to be very realistic. Thank you for sharing a fine talent that ranks right up there with the really great ones.

oh my god this is my favorite story ever on literotica! so romantic! please continue it! <3

All 3 chapters of this story are great. I loved reading the entire series. I have read it 4 times over & each time it has been as good as the first. You are a very good writer.

Well Sweetheart, I loved your story. The only criticism is that it is several chapters too short.

I really loved it - so tender and pure their love and just enough love making - I couldn't stop reading it - you are among the best here

this story is so emotional and made me both smile and cry. an amazing tale.

This story has to be one of my favorites. It has everything a great story needs, it makes you laugh, cry, then laugh again. GREAT STORY!!! 5***** toby9790.

Please write a story about Alli and her brother. I would be awesome to see more stories from you.

Brett is the true epitome of a man. More of us men need to have his sense of honor and duty.

This has to be one of the best I've ever read on this site. Very well written. both in a literary and emotional standpoint. I personally know of a couple that this happened to, although they are cousins and not bro/sis.

I really enjoyed the story (very much) and would encourage you to finish the story. It is a beauriful story, and even though many would not think so. And I really thinks this strikes a cord with many siblings, more then some would want to admit.

Thank You. PPM

Great story , and well written..i`ll be reading the other storys , that you have on literotica..please , write more if possible.

Excellent story. My only complaint is there was a lack of build up between Elizabeth and Bretts relationship. It just seemed like you kinda skipped over that and didnt develop the characters enough. That said I loved it and being a new father myself I actually got choked up some.

I've just noticed over to the right of this comment section, "Similar Stories", the continuing spin-off saga of, Dave and Alicia Ch. 04"!! So the series, in effect, continues which I'm hoping there is some frequent appearances by Brett, Elizabeth and Samantha. In fact since Elizabeth is life-ling friends of Alicia, and the same with Brett and Dave, that with Elizabeth being physically now unable to bare any future children that maybe Alicia might volunteer to be a surogate mother for Brett to impregnant her to bare a child for Elizabeth and Brett.

Of course Dave and Alicia should undoubtedly have their own affair of incestual love and bare their own children. If any love that Dave and Alicia have for each other--and Alicia has exhibited some emotions in that direction--then if their love is as deep and committed as the friends Elizabeth and Brett, both couples will have been enarmoured by Nirvana and will have their heaven on earth together.

The author of this story, with the monicker of **chargergirl** is most assuredly a female. I want to say without any hesitation that she has done herself PROUD with this three-chapter saga of Brett and Elizabeth. Her writing is magnificent, awesome and top-notch in every category. Her character development absolutely senstional; the dialogue is articulate, with lots of expression and compassion; and, the theme is extremely outstanding. My fervent advice is she does NOT keep this gift of pleasing so many readers inside her head. Put your thoughts, ideas, fantasies and emotions to print and bless our souls and lives with some fabulous writing!!!!!

Only thing missing was ex-boyfriend looking like he ran into Jason and Freddy Kreuger

I absolutely loved this story. The part were he almost lost her made me cry. Awesome job on this one too. You are one hell of a writer. Wish you could continue these stories. Excellent job!!!!!

Glad the ex-boyfriend didnt come into play, though I do wish the brother had beat the living fuck out of their father when he came over. Too much conflict in some of the stories makes my stomach churn :/. I stopped reading another one (that prolly turned out fine) where the sister had a hostile ex-boyfriend. After reading a story previously with too much conflict-suspense I couldnt do two in a row, lol. They should have gone to the cops and pressed assult charges and gotten a restraining order and talked to a lawyer and gotten pictures of all the scars they accumulated over the years from that loser :(

Anyway a great story and I appreciate you writing it! :)

This is one of the most real to life stories I have read on literotica. Keep writing, I am sure your fans will agree.

And, as an aside, maybe the twins parents would get killed in an auto accident and it be the other driver's fault and the twins could get the money. That's how I would write it, anyway. Good story, thank you for writing.

Loved the story. Kind of wanted Brett to give Elizabeth a ring for her birthday. Love your stories, thanks

Lots of drama but not too much, really a great love story but I would like to know what happens in the future

This is one of the best, most loving romantic stories on Literotica, that I've found to date. Thank you for your delicate prose, so well crafted and edited.

Powerfully and so gentle.

Thank you, in so many ways,

ST

...The End.

This was a awsome happy/sad story that hits close to home. My wife almost bled out giving birth to our son she did make it. One thing i know for sure i would of dropped to my knees at the sight of her going threw the doors and would of broke down and curled up in a ball right in the middle of the hall. Agine thank you for taking the time to write such a wonderful story.

I'm a sucker for a happy ending love story

T his was a wonderful story. Hope there a little bit more later on in their lives.

Loved it! Realistic, messy, plus a love story that wins in the end.

Thank you for this beautiful and life affirming story.

Truely absolutely magnificent

Fourth time reading this.and still think it is one of the best stories I've read on here. Loved all your stories

I love this story! In fact, I'm halfway through a chargergirl marathon. It is my third read for each of the four stories. They are told with such passion yet are possessed of a heartwarming tenderness. They are just the thing for a tired and often jaded soul. They are wonderful examples of art correcting nature, even if only for an evening. I know I'll be returning to them again and again.

but i guess it continues under a different series. i like the story. so i hope somehow it continues

I love this story, not too much sex (like most of the stories), true feelings seem to be expressed. I was in tears many times and loved it. Please continue, please.

Please don't end it here. A really wonderful story of love & adversity in a taboo setting. I want to read what happens from here.

I keep coming back to the series and it's better every time.The author is so talented the stories are magnificent

I think you should write more for Brett and Elizabeth. These two are great.

I agree with the comments by those who want more of this. Please don't stop here

No, I’m sorry this story did not do it for me. I enjoy sibling incest stories but this one just lost me.

"Brett And Elizabeth Ch. 03:" - Its been almost eight (8) years since I read this series/story.' It seems like a lifetime, but has brought many me pleasant memories of a fantastic story, for the most part. It's a love story of monumental reality, lacking the only ingredient of Elizabeth no longer being able to have Brett's children that would make their lives fruitfully whole. Writer 'chargergirl' has an innate ability to write a love story far beyond exceptional, in particular a story of romantic love and sibling incest, with the grace and feelings of an Angel. The great majority of reader's comment agree.

What a fantastic story. You almost had me in tears. Your writing style is amazing. I hope you write more!

good read, but needs another chapter to see how things turn out for dave and his sister. it seems his sister is already having thoughts about her brother

I think you're a great writer and don't let ANYONE tell you otherwise.

Great writing, please continue.

Again, 5 stars…!!!