All Comments on 'Brian's Story'

Most sensual. Had to start my blood pressure meds again.

Wow verry hott! Good writing style too, and flows swell... Keeps the interest building. You must have a great editor!

I love it, good writing! Anybody know where I can find a girl like that?

This story was fucking hot! My cock was throbbing both times that I read it!

Loved the story ... and really well written

Not your best work. i dont buy the entire premis. i now there are going to be people who disagree and i am fin with that, i just know i would kill a guy who took such liberty with my girl. Girls find guys like this weak and soon will leave them to find an alpha male. Sorry I liked Luke and Amy better.

Nice build up to having him fluff her lover's cock and then to the cream pie clean up.

I give it a full mast!

I find the premise very plausible. The couple depicted is obviously made up of two very confident, committed people that love each other and are able to be open about their sexual needs. Is it true that a lot of women wouldn't be into this? Well, yes. But the story depicts that exceptional girl.

It's a really hot story and I love the focus on commitment and trust and love.

Great story. I totally understand the no kissing rule. My wife and I have that agreement when we are with different partners. I appreciate the love and respect you instilled into your characters. The humiliation thing works for some but not for all. You struck a perfect balance.

Well written. Nearly perfect. Believable too because this happened to me years ago. Nice! Thank you.