All Comments on 'Bride of my Father-In-Law'

by RSchwuler

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donaldelliott11donaldelliott11almost 4 years ago
A-plus

Loved this one. The whole premise of a man's daughter being a trap, attracting a hot young man for her father to fuck and despoil, turns me on something fierce. Watching a husband unmanned and inseminated by the bigger, older man. I'm going to need a new keyboard soon....

Have you written one in which the daughter is complicit?

Don

ps. I enjoy stories about "straight" men who get bent over and go gay. I'm double-hard if their sexual humiliation is witnessed by others - spouse, family, friends, coworkers.

You might enjoy one of my stories.

Donald

My stories:https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=789392&page=submissions

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

What a hot sexy story. I hope there’s more stories as Daddy makes Billy his boy. Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
The hottest

Such a great story, keep it coming.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
So HOT

As usual, so hot. The building humiliation is going to be total. Can't wait for Billy to be exposed, lose his job, wife and life becoming a compete child to his father in law. Got to go and service my master now.

thameswatcherthameswatcheralmost 4 years ago
Great story

Simple love this, and the great cock that made the daughter plunders her husbands anus, perfect. And the older man's testosterone will in time overwhelm the younger man's and cause it to change into estrogen and begin the feminization of the boy. Keeping his bottom raised up will aid this process and yet more of the old man's semen is absorbed by the rectum of the boy.........

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Another hot story!

Here's another great example of the sort of story that hits a lot of my buttons! Older, unattractive dominant man forcing a seemingly attractive straight male to completely submit sexually to the old guy's wants and needs. The humiliation of his dick size, his emasculation, his mental distress at submitting and not wanting to but not being able to find a way to stop it from happening and continuing... and the added thrill of it being his father-in-law so no way to escape contact or to tell his wife without further humiliation! Hard again thinking about it all and will be re-reading several times! Thanks!

Anthony1965Anthony1965almost 4 years ago
OMG Love It

Please continue the story. I'd love to see the wife watch her father fuck her husband. So she knows that she didn't really marry a man. Only a little boy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
HOT, continue

Continue please. Show him submitting completely and permanently becoming a little boy

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Hot! Really love the captive romance. So hot picturing a hunky straight guy forced to slow dance naked with his father-in-law. I really do hope you continue.

cdCindy1cdCindy1almost 4 years ago
just like Don Elliott

Just like another reader - Don Elliott - I would love to suck cock and get fucked in front of friends, neighbors, co-workers and of course my wife and her friends. I'm such a sissy faggot that it's my dream for everyone to find out.

I can't wait to read the next chapters. Hopefully as good as this first chapter.

matteol777matteol777over 3 years ago
Stupendous

Gorgeous, very exciting. I hope you will keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wow!!!

I love this story!! Very sexy and erotic. I love how he is turning him into a little boy. Keep it going!!

johngus22johngus22over 3 years ago

HOt story! Well done!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wow! Loved how complex both characters are. Loved it and story made me squirm.

eroaneroanalmost 2 years ago

Roy's vacuum-like kisses at the beginning had my head swimming.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This is incredible! Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

the control is wonderful. I would love to see the guys life truly dismantled. See him fired from his job for the photos, so he had to totally depend on his new daddy to live. His social network shown what he truly is. made to live all the time like a naked little fuck boy. Very well done. dale10

MichaelfantasiesMichaelfantasiesover 1 year ago

Once a man fucks you, there's no going back! I learned that was true. That's one reason I was afraid to let a man fuck me until I was 24. I didn't want to lose my "Man" status, so to speak. I did though. After, I wanted to stop it, but the more it happened, the harder it became to say no. Also, I fell more into the submissive role both in sex and in life.

This story brings out the dominant / submissive relationship very well. Father-in-law and son-in-law theme is so arousing to read! The forceful kissing would have dropped my resistance too! To be owned like Billy is so scary but so arousing! I wonder what Roy had over Billy that Billy had no choice to be Roy's boy !?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Depending on how open his marriage is, this is a chance to open another door. Gradually break the news to his wife he might be bi, or has some interest in it. Then bring out the fact if he did go that way, among those he thinks he might be attracted to is her dad. Once she gets past the shock reaction, ask her in an open inquisitive manner did she ever consider fucking her dad.

All this leading to the father being a "daddy" to both of them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Nice story. Details oriented, older-younger well showed, submission.

Sex is about power. Writing too.

Good job!

HumiliaterHumiliater10 months ago

An awesome twisted tale! You are a Master of the genre where a typical straight boy repeatedly submits himself to humiliating gay encounters out of NEED versus desire. Please do a sequel explaining poor Billy's life five years later. Has Roy completely dismantled his life? Can you still call his existence a life? Does illy cry himself to sleep? I hope so...

DomFckrDomFckr8 months ago

Almost like my dating a woman and making her my submissive sex toy and one night her little gay son came around to borrow some money from her. Of course while she showered it was e who gave the little teasing twink the money. Then to taunt and tease me and feel me out he showed me pictures on his phone of how the Lesbian's he was living with had dressed him up. Yup he looked just like the younger version of his mom and he could clearly see the hardon growing in my pants. I whispered to him he was playing with fire and might end up tied up next to his mom if he continued to tease me. Of course the little shit had to show me he was hard and in a sweet voice like his mom asked me if i would make him squirt like i had made her and if he would cry out in ecstasy like she did too putting a Very Naughty image in my head. I gave him a little extra saying if he truly wanted is fantasy to cum true then he had better buy more X as his mom may need a little encouragement to cross that step and even though they would not be committing incest they would Both become my subs bound, Blindfolded, gagged (cut down the noise when they came over and over again) as I Love to make my sub a mindless slut as she cums over and over practically begging to not cum anymore but also begging to be fucked in all her holes as she especially liked to be rough fucked up the ass as the taboo and nastiness of me practically raping and debasing her gave her such shameful orgasms she couldn't look me in the face. Well he got his fantasy but it was too intense for her and after a couple more times with her every time I fucked her remembered those nights. I think her wanting it but also afraid of where it could lead made her break it off. He moved away after that happened so the distance helped her. So in the end it cost me but the memories are in a way worth it. If I was Roy I would first bring his daughter into being his sub and then have Billy's dad witness it and maybe a little booze or x to make him also turn like Father like son as the fluffler and then have Billy be Daddy Kyle's first to warm him up for Roy as they spit roast him and daughter films with either a bullet or butterfly attached to her pussy as Roy controls the remote to induce several orgasms. Of course Billy and Kyle cleaning Roy as he does his daughter as the grand finale giving Billy a cream pie to clean up afterwards as Kyle eats the cum from Billys ass pussy. But I am far nastier probably then the author butt will see in next chapter. And any simp married bi-boys wanting to come out to wifey and not get divorced and stop sneaking around on downlow contact me and I shall make your wish cum true as I am more Real then Roy.

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