All Comments on 'Bride Submission: Family Gangbang'

Awesome can't wait for the rest of the series just hope they come a bit quicker.

Agree with previous anon. You always have these great stories. You hint at really good followups. And then you make us wait forever. Please do these chapters quicker. Along with some of your others. Like What Mom Knows, Two Mistresses, Kinky Tales, Backseat Mommy, 1950's, and Like Mother Like Daughter. Please.

Can not wait

Yet another in a long line of great erotic writings!! Thanks

The only disappointing part is waiting so long for such epic, incestuous depravity. Group blowjobs, assfucking, and one of the best airtight scenes I've ever read. Please keep this series coming sooner rather than later. I am very pleased with this chapter. I love how Brittany went from a proud feminist to a three-hole, incest-loving. Patriarch-fucking, ass-eating, cocksucking cumslut!

Very very hot :) Thank you !

So happy to have this instalment finally, this series has been haunting me for about a year now!

At last Jasmine, an excellent episode, full of my favorite items, mass cock-sucking,cunt and arse fucking followed by the best ever air-tight scene on these pages. PLEASE, PLEASE, don't make us wait months or years for the sequels, make this story your No 1 priority. The only thing that I personally am disappointed about is that I'm not Brtttany, she sure is one lucky bitch.

Another great story by my favorite author. Please keep this going. I love how she has turned into such a slut.

Finally, another submission... not trying to be ungrateful. I thought you had abandoned this storyline. Thanks!

This is the first of your stories I have read so far and the best on this site so far!! Great work, looking forward to your other works.

More Please

Where is the grand-mother-slut?

"Bride Submission" just keeps getting better...

thank you!

i read all three installments in one day and have to agree with the others that you should make this story a priority. I can't wait until you finally get to the point of the foursome with Brittany, Peaches and their husbands.

This was the first of your series I read and has made me a tremendous fan of your writing. I waited well over a year for this installment and it was well worth the wait. Please continue this series. It is amazing.

Jasmine, you have done it again. To use your words "this twisted story of sexual debauchery" is fantastic. I can only hope that you are able to add the planned pieces to the story. Your work always gets my total attention, and Brittany's story did just that. Thank you!

Bride submission is the beat erotic story I have ever read. My request would be to do a chapter where Mr .Stockwell the president and his wife uses Brittany. And if you can publish the chapters quicker, I would die if I have to wait a year for a chapter.

Please continue thr story, your are an excellent author with an AMAZING IMAGINATION.

This series is awesome , I read it all in one day & can't wait & I'm very excited for next installment . You are an amazing writer . Please make this series your priority .

Go for more stories. Incredible!

Amazing any idea when the next part will be up?

I have shared my wife with a couple other guys, and I would love her to have this attitude towards all this. Well done.

Please spend time and make sure to complete the series.

please prioritize this series.

humble request from a humble fan.

I cum so hard reading your stories of the Order. I always look forward to more of your stories but need more of Brittany's slut adventures

Please finish this series. It's soooo fucking hot!!!

I love your stories! This series is amazing. When do you plan to continue? I'm really curious about how thing will turn out.

I hope you soon continue this series to the end. It is my favorite of yours as well as of anything I've read in Literotica.

They usually give a gift to the couple.

So the Syndom in order to make sure she is absolute submission they plan to put all the males from her family to gangbang her senseless while they competiting with each other who will manage to impregnating her?

That's is what they plan to give for gift, their first incest child from her family as order from the syndrome?

this is one of my favorite series written by please continue it wating eagerly for next update

Please give priority to this series and continue it regularly.

Love your work

This story is just too much! I would love to read this story w/o all of the domination and submission.

i think that Brittney should move up one step in the hierarchy because she is a good submissive and has a better job then Suzy I loved fingering my pussy while reading this amazing and sexy story

... and hot!

I'm thinking pre-wedding orgy so she walks down the aisle with cum running down her legs.

So hot so far, please finish off all the suggested next chapters! Looking forward to reading what lies in store for Brittney

YOU ARE THE BEST

fk i can’t wait for more

Please please eagerly waiting for next parts of this one

Looking forward to the rest

Please update this

I need more. My pussy is so wet. I want to read

The rest

That was awesome!!!

You are going to have the readers cumming all over themselves add daddy getting pegged by the daughters and sons !!!!

MY wife is stroking and sounding my cock as we are reading this story,she said my cock got harder and is dipping more while they talk about dad liking to be pegged.

Can't wait for you to add that in

I really wish you’d continue this story. I love it but it’s too short!

It was a good story but by the second page I started rolling my eyes at how many time they said "I can't believe we didn't do this sooner!" Repeatedly saying a phrase doesn't make it any hotter

So good but need more chapters. Nastier if possible

I got really horny, and had to got to my bedroom and finger myself...

Hope you continue the series it is hot

There were so many parts you planned - I would love to see more :)

Thank you, I see you undertook to address some of the issues with this series.

Especially with why she was allowed to walk in cold to this lifestyle change. And I do hope the series eventually reaches to the point where she can approach the Tribunal to fix this issue. I do worry that you have put here public persona in jeopardy by 1) making her boss a Syndom and 2) making females subservient to all males. Just take the sniping by the two brothers, this (as you pointed out) juvenile behavior is liable to be played out on a much grander scale when the two males are in conflict. The ability to order your rival's wife to bend over or to take his daughter in front of him in order to humiliate the male just seems to me to make the whole structure inherently unstable.

However, I think you have a good path for having Brittany move up in the ranks and become a power behind the throne (as it were).

I also love your displaying that a submissive really has more power than it may seem to be on the surface.

Egads, this is turning into Game of (incestuous) Thrones.

I just read it and really hope you will someday continue this story. It was really strong, so it definitly has the potential for 3-4 more parts.

Absolutely fantastic. So many of my fetishes are addressed here, and I'm even beginning to enjoy reading about incest, something that didn't interest me until I started this serial.

I'm intrigued by Brittany's interaction with the other female sluts. I'm bi myself and I've always enjoyed dominating submissive females. As I type this, my cunt is leaking like a sieve and I'm looking forward to getting myself off with my rabbit.

Thank you for chapters 1-3. Please see the title of this comment, and do something about it!

WOW!!! So far my favorite series of your work. I know you haven't posted any follow ups to this series in years but this one is begging for more (or maybe it's just me begging). Especially the Tribunal. I got to that part and knew this was going to be a special chapter. Either way excellent work. Keep up the excellent stories!

i'd love to see more of this series, when you are able. thoroughly enjoyed it

Sarah

Oh man, this concept is so so good, please write more!

Wow! Just Wow!!!!

Thu Bride Submission: In-law Orgy - YES

Fri Bride Submission: Lesbian Party - YES

Sat Bride Submission: Pre-Wedding Sin - YES

Sat Bride Submission: The Bridal Suite - YES

Not everything you write is to my taste but when you hit my spot you really do. This is an amazing series and I hope you continue the saga out. I can see this one going for a *long* time.

I need more of this serie. Mu pussy is so wet now ...

A GOOD story. Can I have more PLEASE??

I NEED More

Not nice leaving a good story half way.

🙃

Again you leave a compelling saga with lots of suggestions but no conclusions. You’d prefer whatever gratification you get from a one time contest to the feel good that you would have from a completed story and the satisfaction of many of your readers. It was a great start. Please finish!

Thank you for entertaining me!

is this the end?4

Love the Bride Submission series, and ALL of your other works.. hope to see more of this one and others in the future.

Love this and many other of your stories. Would love to see more of this series

Makes me wish i had family to fuck like this

Great story. Please continue it.

Love so many of your stores. Please continue the series. I know it's been a few years since this episode, but could you "PLEASE" continue????

Stories not for me if you like it read on. Stopped half way through page 1. Not sure why such abuse is considered erotic. So the groom gets a used up submissive bride.

Some times a little confusing and I get lost; that is how it read. Where is Bradley in all of this?