All Comments on 'Briseis Ch. 02'

Please give Julius some redeemable qualities. I like the character, I really do. Please not too much abuse (like other stories in lit).

Please let there be love (and hot steamy sex)

Keep up the good work!

Don't worry, love is on the way. I'm just into kinky shit.

XOXO,

-digitalbath

P.S. All non constructive criticism/hate comments will be deleted. <3. If you have improvements or suggestions, please let me know! I am all ears, since I'm trying my best to learn to be a good writer here ^.^

Everyone knows that his wife likes to dose her wine with opiates. Maybe he can make her overdose and die and then he can marry the slave girl while she is pregnant with his baby?

Bahahaha. 'A slave girl...wine days ago.' No man, that's just sick. Thank fuck you're in the right place for it! Shot for story.

One can only hope that the vulgar and vile LJB dies an agonizing death in battle to save the lovely Briseis from future depredations by this piece of garbage.