All Comments on 'Broken Hands'

Hot as fuck!

Long build-up was mentioned up front. But the payoff was not as exciting as some of the other stories with an injured character. Thanks for writing.

I rarely find a story here that I thoroughly enjoy. This story is a rarity, Thank You!!!!! Please keep writing/submitting!

Alright, that was some amazing build-up, followed by an excellent climax. Cannot wait for the next chapter.

5 stars! A very hot story, more please! 👍

WOW! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

What beautiful mutual lust. Loved the build-up and hated it at the same time. I look forward to the next chapter. It will be interesting to see how much of a future these two have together.

Absolutely loved it, really long build up and a good pay off, really hoping the next part is soon.

Tysm

Great story!

Very good setup

Can't wait for more

Loved the long drawn out tension! Descriptions of the characters are so detailed I can practically see them in my imagination and man, I'm now lusting for her too!

Great fun story! I always enjoy your wit and ability to understate the obvious. I look forward to your next installment!

Really fun story to read! Looking forward to the next, hopefully less vanilla, chapter!

Great story. Looking forward to more

The ease of how this story flowed (especially one of this length) is a true testament of your excellence as a writer.

The best line of the story, though? "They fucked until they couldn't anymore, and then, like the Soviet Union in the early 90's...they collapsed." Just brilliant.

Great read. I enjoy a long build up. Of course it is great to live out every guys fantasy of the hot neighborhood lady. I know we all had them.

Excellent job of the slow build up. Good work on the character development too. The characters are consistent through the whole story, you focus on the two of them and don’t get lost in his interactions with his friends. Very nicely done. Please! Do write a sequel now that the wheels have come off. Just how far do they go? How experienced is she now that she’s got a fuck buddy with stamina?

loved it

Great story!!

Would love to read more of this story in a sequel!

Beautifully written as always. Sequel please.

No way he's in and out of the ER in an hour... 😂

Loved it. Build-up was so good.

Good story, nice buildup. But how does a woman widowed for 3 years have a 1 year old kid?

Well thought out, written for fast reading, nice characters with good descriptions of everything.

When you said long exposition, you weren’t kidding! The fantasy you set up was great, and the characters were appropriate. But here’s the thing. When you narrate long stretches of the story in third person, you actually take the reader out of the story and create space. You had very little dialog to break up the narration. I suggest one of two things. One, replace as much of the narration as possible with dialog and let the story develop out of the interaction of the characters in real time instead of it being related as past tense. Two, of you must narrate, switch to first person. Then, your narration can still be experienced as Dalton’s thoughts occurs as things happen. Either way, the reader will be inside the story instead of hearing it from outside.

Awesome!

Fun story to read and I’m looking forward to a sequel.

Bravo

Need part 2!!! Very hot!

HOT. Great build-up and decent writing. Looking forward to part two.

How about a second submission? Soon?

This story was so hot and erotic!!! When are you going to have the second version done so we can all read the hot and juicy details?

What an incredible story!!! More please...

Where’s part 2????

That was a fun romp! Please continue!

Always checking back for your next story always incredible

Please finish the story

I'd love to read the sequel (where the birth control pills get lost)

Please finish the story

PART 2 ??

Some facts don't line, but didn't take away from the story. The slow build just brings to the point that I need the rest of the story, the casts are not off yet how much more fun is there. His cousin comes to visit? Aunty? needs love triangle. Adrienne sister visits or Sister inlaw?

Great story, super hot and really hoping there is eventually a Part 2.

Thanks for the detail, the build-up and just an overall enjoyable story.

Thanks for sharing!

Amazing story. Love all of your work. Please make a part 2 to this

was looking through romance tags and saw this story then i checked the tags again after reading and romance wasn’t there. idk if that’s a glitch on this website, but i do see this story being a romance/love story potential. the build-up was beautifully executed and i’m looking forward to more.

one of the best!!

"To Be Continued" you promised! Will one of his friends drop by? Maybe her babysitter? So many possibilities...

Excellent story and needs another chapter for sure. So open ended it could go anywhere.

Amazingly well crafted. Please bring on part 2.

Couple of minor errors which proof reading should have picked up, eg. road instead of rode, which made me smile. Excellent EC story which was quite sweet as the 2 horny people orted out the Summer. 5⛤

Hottest imaginary chick EVER!

Excellent story i loved it, five stars. I do hope you can find time to write chapter two. Keep up the good work 👏

I’m begging for more. This was perfect.

Great build up. Great characters! And hot!

Five stars!

When's the sequel come out? We need more!

Need part 2 so badly!

She is a woman after my own heart, never waste a hard cock❤️❤️😈😈

Still waiting for part 2. I check every now and then if it’s done. Please.

any news on part two ace?

OMG. I can’t believe what an incredibly hot story this was. The build up was perfect. It took a while, but seemed so believable and real. I felt like I was in the story. I felt his every emotion. When it was over I realized I had been holding my breath.

Your writing ability is through the roof.

Easily one of, if not the hottest stories I’ve ever read on this site. The descriptions of them both was so sexy and erotic. The absolutely easiest 5-😊😊😊😊😊’s ever. Thank you for the Hope Diamond of gem stories.❤️

This was a 10. Please do part two.

I too, would very much like to read part two of this epic sexual saga!

I was hoping for a Pt. 2 but I saw this was published in ‘21 so my hopes are low. Would love for you to expand more on this though.

🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Very hot story! I had 2 great jerk-off sessions with it. Please write part 2!!!!!