by Imstillfun
How about Chapter 2 where Roy shows up and gets his ass kicked
That may explain how FAST a fan I'm becoming of your work! Fucking brilliant? .......
Michelle is very fortunate to have 2 guys that really care for her. it is a situation that can work out well for all
Loved this! SUCH a lucky girl to have two caring, loving men! definitely need another instalment!
I certainly hope so. Forget about Roy, but would love to hear more about Michelle, Jim and Barry. Perhaps Michelle has a hot roommate or girlfriend that could join and give Barry that connection?
I absolutely love doing this piece of writing. It was great how you didn't just jump into the fucking but build up the tension. Great job!
As always your stories are amazing. Hot and sensual with a good build up and climatic end. They always come across as believable and genuine in there telling. Thank you
I'd really like to see a sequel to this that takes place ten years from this after they've grown. Either they're married and revisiting old events or they come back together to rekindle a love they once had. Something anything would be great.
You need to continue this story with a part two... need I say more!
Great story. Looking forward to another chapter in this story, and more in general.
Is it just me or do her clothes keep appearing to be different then what was described? Kept having to go back and reread because it felt like I missed something :/
... you put together a good story. I'd love go see more about this threesome, but I know that you rarely do that. Good job. Another rare 5*s from me.
This is a wonderful and very hot story. Good characters and well-developed (in more than one sense of the word). Again, I’d love to know what happens next. You’ve got a real talent for making your readers want more.
this is bloody brilliant....
my only wee complaint?
could be longer for its so very good and needs to be continued in my opinion
This story was one of the best I have read. Still have a story for you and after this one you are up to it.
Very well written. Enjoyed the story very hot. I can see this hitting on many men's fantasy list who have a hot sister. Been a great addition for them to take her on up to her room and pleasure her all night long. Bringing out her true inner slut. Tiger in the bedroom. Enjoyed the story very much. Looking forward to your other stories. A woman's perspective is good.
Loved the story. Well written and very sexy. I believe you hit on a lot of men's fantasy that have a hot sister. Would say it would be a great ending with them taking her to her bed room and pleasure her all night long. Bringing out her true inner slut. Little tiger in the bed room. I enjoy reading a woman's perspective. More sensual and tender in some cases. Looking forward to your next stories. Loved the Labor day weekend.
I like to do this like this story. I have a hot sister and I want someone to be my friend from Pakistan and we do this scene truly.
The story is written so good and made me feel hot
Super hot story. Your back story about coming off a break up was a legit premise for a hot encounter. As always the build up was good and true to form the sex made me hard AF. I love that she took 2 loads deep inside. More stories please where 2 buddies share the girl.
Again you wrote a highly believable and sexy tale. My only issue is it was a 2 pager instead of a 5 pager
I like that both young studs got their hard cocks deep in her young pussy and nutted her. Perhaps she is with child and they can stick her again when this one is born. Would like to watch their young asses humping her toward motherhood and shooting their seed deep in her belly.
An extremely believable erotic story of what can happen between a sister, brother and his friend. Once she entertains the idea in her mind of going all the way with her brother and his friend, there isn’t anything that can stand in the way of the three of them mating and nature taking its course.
Loved this story…five stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Would love to have a lady of mine that I could say
"Kiss me, then suck him dry" to.
and then she would. Chapter 2? They DP her
Super erotic, and believable. Each character seems true to life. The path of life isn't always a straight line.