by SmallTitFan
I hope you continue the story. I got an instant hard on visualizing your story.
Except for the ages - they would likely have been maybe 14 and 13, more or less - such an episode could have really happened to siblings. Whether it would have progressed to anything more overt would depend on other things: how much indoctrination they had received in conventional morality would be the biggee, but also how horny they became, and how much privacy they had. Then there would be the awareness of having to live with whatever they decided to do beyond the relative innocence of show and touch. SmallTitFan is an excellent writer, and I look forward to future episodes in this little saga, as the siblings decide, no doubt, to explore even more; as a little satisfied curiosity leads to more temptation.
Good start on the story, needs more chapters. Thanks
Like other posters, I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter.
great story- nice hot sex, nice kids, needs more chapters thanks
I would like to read another chapter where they go all of the way and become lovers.
Thanks for the read.
wtf was that? a guy waiting for love and turned out to be loser? man you need to rewrite whole thing
How sweet these kids were. Ok maybe a little late in life for this but the better for a bit of yearning.
Don't get me wrong; I really like what's here, but it falls short. It feels like the story just got started.
Since it doesn't mention CH# 1 we don't know if there's more in the works, but we're all obviously hoping
THX;
DKP
you need to either post two or three more chapters of this or delete this one or the other. posting less than half a story is worse than no story at all.
If they weren't smart enough to find the Prelude, then you have to Question thier Intelligence. I don't think they grasped what the story was about. I really Enjoyed it, ( big fan of small Breast and Thongs, on Women AND Men..Kudos, am now heading to read more of your Stories, Thanks
couldn't stop reading till I got to the end. would love to read more
Never once when I was 14 did I wonder about anyone getting High or Drunk let alone a young girl in my school. What a different world you lived in.
Patch
Really enjoy that and hopefully more chapters to come.
That was pretty fun! However, while Ive seen plenty of clits get larger when you rub them, I've never seen one get wetter, just dryer. Now everything below that gets wetter, hence a regular dipping in of the finger, then back to the clit...
But then the sex was much too fast. No step by step. Take your time, better to have the process take a long time.
You wrote, “The only thing better would be seeing it . . ."” This line is memorable. While I've read several stories with the same theme, your phrasing makes it better….inching over the line making it quite real. Your scene progresses to, “"Sweetie, you don't need to feel bad about your boobs. I think they're beautiful. If you weren't my sister, I'd . . . wanna suck and lick on 'em all day and all night."” Another perfect line that inches the scene forward realistically. Well written. Armed with those lines I would have tried it on my cousin.
As Anonymous said down below... no one has ever seen a clit get wetter when you rub it. They do not produce juice.
Please learn basic female anatomy. Her juices are produced from her vagina, and need to be brought up to the clit, especially if she's lying on her back. It would be great if you'd edit your story to be anatomically correct.
I can’t wait for the next episode.
Fantastic start. Please continue.
Love and respect between siblings.
Lizzie sounds so adorable and sweet <3 I love small boobs as well so this is a great treat :3