All Comments on 'Brother in Arms'

Great ideas rampant in the text and fair to ymm sex with promises of just about everything from stepmom to mom in the asylum??? Keep writing!!!!! WD

I really liked this story. The news story at the end was a nice and very unexpected surprise. Another chapter might be interesting, but not necessary.

Thank you for writing.

Great job, nice story, sexy, sad, happy, a little of everything.

no real begining or background and no real end the news article sounded like an after thought. would have been nice if you had them tell the father and mother about them being together you just skipped over that part. this read like you took a three chapter book and only posted the second chapter tossing the first and third out think about a rewrite to fill in the holes

It was all going nicely until you had the protestors shouting epithets at them. I think maybe you should look that one up.

It was a horny story.

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It was kind of interesting reading a story in this section where the stress and strife was happening around them, but not directly to them! Honestly it's a nice change... Usually its like kids get caught by parent(s), fight ensues blah blah, or kids confess to parents, fight ensues, or on the fantasy end parent finds out and joins the kids blsh blah.

I kept expecting either the mom getting involved with them, or the new wife, lol.

Gotta say it was nice seeing a fairly realistically described anal sequence, though she didnt really have any pain, hell not even a comment from having a few fingers shoved in her, heh. ...but instead of the typical 'oooh baby its so good Im gonna cum!' the more realistic 'ugh, it feels like I need to take a shit!' Is said! Hehehe, now thats realism! ;)

The cleanup and ending was a bit of a surprise, but it is a short story and at least it doesnt leave you hanging! Thanks for writing for us!