All Comments on 'Brother Love Ch. 02'

Keep it rolling

Looking forward to see where this goes. Thanks (so far). :)

I have to admit, sex is good, sex stories are cool, but thinking, frankly there is nothing better. I have a feeling this story is going to cause a lot of thinking. I intend to enjoy.

Great read. Please continue. Your on to something great here.

Very tightly written. Lots of information to flush out the story. Rich details about character background with minimal words. I think I am really going to enjoy this story as it develops.

Have enjoyed your stories in the past. If a suggestion jumps out at me, I'll research it and send you in the idea. Thanks for all your stories. This one looks like it's going to be fun!

This looks like it will be really fun to read.

i'm excited about the possibilities.

lots of gas in the tank so keep going. thank you

A bit far fetched but very interesting and well written. A bit difficult for this OLD man to keep track of who said what and when but I guess the younger, more observant readers won't have much trouble.

Thanks and please continue this most enjoyable tale.

de Jay

?Hal Fast? Really? What a halfassed idea!

god, I love puns, malapropisms and even Catachresis are a peeling.

I love a fun read. Thanks for sharing.

Ed Grocott

edgrocott@gmail.com

"Which came first, the chicken or the egg" is not the inponderable chestnut it is used as. The egg came before the chicken. Chickens can only be hatched from chicken eggs, but a chicken egg may be laid by a proto-chicken, which has had a sportive mutation to its zygote.

it was the chicken first, God created the fowl, lots of them, and then they laid the eggs. TK

If you gonna jump off a bridge make sure the water below is deep

It's very entertaining to watch as the little group comes together. And there are sooooo many possibilities.

But hope you keep to philosophical questions and not Loving Wives type stuff. Stay big, Plato & such....

I like where this is going, very good setup.

So far average

you're always interesting, even when I've read them all several times

So far, so good, even if the main character is a bit unbelievable.

I am curious to see how and why his wife screwed him over. Aunt should have informed him about pre-nups?

Interesting idea

Loving this story!

Still intriguing.

Next chapter please.

Love the premise of this story, a guy with some money doing what he wants to do rather than investing it to make more money. Doesn't say much for our top 1% does it? What good is a billion or two if it just sits there?

Our guy is sort of looking for answers I guess but there are none. Inflation, lack of affordable housing, the homeless problem, the corruption and partisanship in our political system. A president that's all there. The list goes on. This story goes on and is interesting as to where it's leading. 5 stars, not showing comments on this one? Why?

Not sure what else today because this is my second reading and the story line is very good and thought provoking. And your writing is still proving nothing in life is free, not even a non-profit organization, you need a license and because of our litigious society we need lawyers, and they ain't cheap. We also live in fear, that's why we all carry insurance. Keep up the good work. The only problem I've found is I get very involved with your stories so I don't move much, I just read and enjoy while waiting around to die.

Sorry going for brutally honest here. This seems like a sorta naval gazing rehash of 500 Annie's. I love your work but, man, this one is heavy going.

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