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All Comments on 'Brothers and Sisters Ch. 01'

by SteveWallace

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Keep going. Great Story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great scenario, hope I can keep the players all sorted-out when I read the next installments.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I'll reserve judgement for the moment, but it is a good start.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Love it

Merlyn74Merlyn74over 2 years ago

I agree, a good start. Let’s see how long we can avoid billionaires, flying lessons and dozens of characters while these relationships are explored.

Frankie1952Frankie1952over 2 years ago

Not my kind of story with others involved. I wont read any further.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Really slow development.....boring.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

That's right, they loved each other, yet why involve someone to get in the way?

bshell47bshell47over 2 years ago
Slow but interesting.

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

AWESOME build up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I will not cast any votes till I see where this goes. It just doesn't seem like the brother and sister love story with devotion and commitment to one another. Thank you.

'Wildbill

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

1) Cuck 2) Get an editor

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