All Comments on 'Brothers Return'

A good story that is not rushed. Realistic elements that explore feelings of many brothers and sisters that are close in age. keep writing it may encourage others to follow up on their feelings.

I hope you continue :-)

Are you kidding? The bro talks with the sis for 5 mins and he's trying to bed her, and someone thinks this is not rushed?

Is good, but slow it down.

slow things down take a moment to decribe more! He only talked to his sister for what like five minutes?!? Just slow things down a little is all i say.

Slender and toned, but with 32D's. Why does every author feel the need to supply the woman with hugh tits and the men with monster cocks? How about some realism?

no way she could be in gymnastics with D cup tits ant thing over a B gets in the way and most girls want an A cup. do some research so you don't look and sound like an idiot. and as said earlier slow down there is no fire so do some build up and more nackgrouund.

DBRS