All Comments on 'Brothers Return Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great series.

I enjoyed reading chapters 1 to 3, they are great. I can't wait to read the next one, hopeing it will be soon.

AyamiAyamiover 13 years ago
hope u write the next one soon

cant wait 4 the next one to come but please write it soon

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
good but

good but only if you continue and keep the rough sex and violence out of it that only ruins a good story but do continue soon

DBRS

JIm7PussyAssJIm7PussyAssabout 13 years ago
so when does MOM get in on the action.....?????

So when does MOM get some cock and let daughter eat her pussy???

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Where is the finish? Please finish with another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
CRAP

No wonder there are no other comments what a crazy ending

Turtle1952Turtle1952about 6 years ago
More please

Please finish this story, so much more fun to experience yet with sis and maybe mum too.

Joshuad2477sJoshuad2477sover 5 years ago
Needs a finish

I wish you would finish the story because it was awesome and they never even had sex. If you ever do keep it bro sis and leave it like that. Also a happy ending would nice. Good writing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Well, everyone wants you to finish this story, and so do I. Does he take her back with him to become one of the wives waiting for her Seal to come home as her tummy grows? Lot of way for you to go. Your audience awaits! Careful of the grammar.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Oh yes. Just read it again. Sister goes to class, and Mom gets her son before sister, over and over. But sis isn't far away, and then there's a three way. Beautiful beginning. Keep your editing tight.

XYZ

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